Not Like This and Battle Royale
 

Not Like This & Battle Royale: these are the newest tracks i got the other ones on my page are like way old but ppl say they are tight too so give them a listen


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/crysismusic.htm

oh and by the way i am Crysis
but phrantik went crazy and banned as many ppl as he could on Parental Advisory's roster and i was one of em so i should be unbanned soon


but hit this up and give me some feedback

uppin for some feedback

The beat was alright, and your flow was alright. I don't detect any *umph*, or anything that sets you apart from the other people on here. "Not like this" is a little better, but I'm not getting any *whoa* from them. Are you reading this...

lol yea....those are just songs i put on the internet my good stuff will be out on CD whenever i get the time to do it.....im a very busy person

"Battle Royal" was decent, the punchlines weren't very hard at all, although your delivery wasn't that bad, but work on that emotion a little bit more.. Even though you have that aspect somewhat down, always need some improvement, of course. Although, I enjoyed "Not Like This" more, because it was a full length track and I was hearing out the concept, hit home, family.. The end was dramatic, as well.. When you were completing suicide, pretty insane.. >> I give it to you for the SECOND track, first one that I listened was eh, na'mean? Keep elevating upon your word..

Thanks man... ima be puttin up some new shit soon