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08-19-03, 09:38 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Not Like This and Battle Royale
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Not Like This & Battle Royale: these are the newest tracks i got the other ones on my page are like way old but ppl say they are tight too so give them a listen
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/crysismusic.htm oh and by the way i am Crysis but phrantik went crazy and banned as many ppl as he could on Parental Advisory's roster and i was one of em so i should be unbanned soon but hit this up and give me some feedback |
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08-23-03, 02:01 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin for some feedback
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08-23-03, 02:14 PM | #3 | ||||||
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The beat was alright, and your flow was alright. I don't detect any *umph*, or anything that sets you apart from the other people on here. "Not like this" is a little better, but I'm not getting any *whoa* from them. Are you reading this...
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08-23-03, 11:02 PM | #4 | ||||||
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lol yea....those are just songs i put on the internet my good stuff will be out on CD whenever i get the time to do it.....im a very busy person
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08-24-03, 07:24 AM | #5 | ||||||
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"Battle Royal" was decent, the punchlines weren't very hard at all, although your delivery wasn't that bad, but work on that emotion a little bit more.. Even though you have that aspect somewhat down, always need some improvement, of course. Although, I enjoyed "Not Like This" more, because it was a full length track and I was hearing out the concept, hit home, family.. The end was dramatic, as well.. When you were completing suicide, pretty insane.. >> I give it to you for the SECOND track, first one that I listened was eh, na'mean? Keep elevating upon your word..
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08-30-03, 12:12 AM | #6 | ||||
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Thanks man... ima be puttin up some new shit soon
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