2 many problems 4 a 17yr old
 

2 many problems so little time
dats y all i do is bust rhymes

I'm 17 years old
gotta be bold
lucky my shit isn't out in the cold

with a kid on the way i gotta paid
damn thats the dark side of getting laid
one day its all about the hoes and the hydro
next is all about the cribs and the bib
fuck i wish it all were a fib

so i could have fun and play madlibs
spend all my money on BBQ ribs

i should of just came onto her eyelids
nobody can deny this
or be as pissed off as I is
at the clitoris
cause thats all bitches are good for
one day u say that'll be a fun whore
the next day she be knockin on ur back door
sayin shes pregnant and the babys yours

good drop...up yah vocab an get some pucnes try to elavate but u got potential 1

i should of just came onto her eyelids

^ain't that the truth

Uh your shit is as basic as i've seen in a while but it ain't bad..
the flow was good the structure was not bad, the topic came across okay but not enough emotion.....elevate