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08-27-03, 11:16 PM
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2 many problems 4 a 17yr old
IP: 3E33 E55C
2 many problems so little time
dats y all i do is bust rhymes I'm 17 years old gotta be bold lucky my shit isn't out in the cold with a kid on the way i gotta paid damn thats the dark side of getting laid one day its all about the hoes and the hydro next is all about the cribs and the bib fuck i wish it all were a fib so i could have fun and play madlibs spend all my money on BBQ ribs i should of just came onto her eyelids nobody can deny this or be as pissed off as I is at the clitoris cause thats all bitches are good for one day u say that'll be a fun whore the next day she be knockin on ur back door sayin shes pregnant and the babys yours |
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08-27-03, 11:20 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
good drop...up yah vocab an get some pucnes try to elavate but u got potential 1
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08-28-03, 12:45 AM
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IP: 9B33 081B
i should of just came onto her eyelids
^ain't that the truth Uh your shit is as basic as i've seen in a while but it ain't bad.. the flow was good the structure was not bad, the topic came across okay but not enough emotion.....elevate |
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