my life? fuck it, need a new one, can i have urs?
 

arise in new senses...sentenced/
recieved tha mind's endless...sentence/
believe me, ur offended...indented/
i intended...to dent it...,...u kno...ur soul/

wat...wat...wat...here i go...

i flow, to show ya'll, jus tha commotion/
me free? i see, yes indeed, poetry in motion/
my electronical, bionics on an A.I. mission/
leave tha relay's controlin tha instruments and equipment/
technology, ironically, is unstable/
abled me to free to make MC's fall away from they table/
nuclears, leave holocausts for tha future/
new here? than share ur name and ur two cares/
i blew up tha scene, now u no longer watch TV/
cause in reality, world's full of crime not peaceful streets/
leave tha beats in a back room to diction/
a remix rewinded back to fact to change fiction/
vision fixed wit two glass pair of eyes/
jus so u could see the new used CPU's playin battle cries/
that's right, a freind WILL backstab in tha end/
cause it's how u survive to fight...my dear friend/

arise in new senses...sentenced/
recieved tha mind's endless...sentence/
believe me, ur offended...indented/
i intended...to dent it...,...u kno...ur soul/

i'll probably be tha new prophit, i've got it/
well enough understood so it don't matter if i lost it/
registered a new delicate way to rhyme/
a simple yet crippled n busted glass of time/
cause tha sand ran out, OK, jus flip it ova/
to watch tha Earth tumble out into space and explode into a nova/
enough HOVA's, imma pimp verses/
bullet riddled hearses, still leave curses/
hidden in tha sperm and, it's now a new generation/
runnin wit tha pace so my heart don't stop racin/
ragin against machines cause they can't be beat/
no mere mortal will except that fact of their defeat/
run through a portal, now i see ya'll demented/
tha light bent in closer to show me tha box i've been sent in/
i fit perfect, not a single molucule loose/
who knows jus which planet tha AI will choose/
to let me attack, no turnin back, this is tha track/
i've been stuck on my whole life, since tha very first act/

uppin...

damn, nice flow, alot of guys on these board have so much talent. keep dropping bruv

r ya'll gonna sleep on this shit like u do all my otha shit???...

yeh dawg, the flow was off a hook
nice vocab too!!!
keep droppin

check out my link, if ya haven't already

peace!

uppin...

gawd damn wat is up wit tha sleepin? UPPIN!!!!

favorable to nas style adressing evrything and nothing at once very well done wordplay is vscious and poetic stanza works well for oyu.

i liked ur flow, dat kept me boppin ma head and readin


you could work on da hook but otherwise than that


tight shit mayn, nice fuckin flow