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Old 09-04-03, 08:50 PM   #1
Provoked Images
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my life? fuck it, need a new one, can i have urs?

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arise in new senses...sentenced/
recieved tha mind's endless...sentence/
believe me, ur offended...indented/
i intended...to dent it...,...u kno...ur soul/

wat...wat...wat...here i go...

i flow, to show ya'll, jus tha commotion/
me free? i see, yes indeed, poetry in motion/
my electronical, bionics on an A.I. mission/
leave tha relay's controlin tha instruments and equipment/
technology, ironically, is unstable/
abled me to free to make MC's fall away from they table/
nuclears, leave holocausts for tha future/
new here? than share ur name and ur two cares/
i blew up tha scene, now u no longer watch TV/
cause in reality, world's full of crime not peaceful streets/
leave tha beats in a back room to diction/
a remix rewinded back to fact to change fiction/
vision fixed wit two glass pair of eyes/
jus so u could see the new used CPU's playin battle cries/
that's right, a freind WILL backstab in tha end/
cause it's how u survive to fight...my dear friend/

arise in new senses...sentenced/
recieved tha mind's endless...sentence/
believe me, ur offended...indented/
i intended...to dent it...,...u kno...ur soul/

i'll probably be tha new prophit, i've got it/
well enough understood so it don't matter if i lost it/
registered a new delicate way to rhyme/
a simple yet crippled n busted glass of time/
cause tha sand ran out, OK, jus flip it ova/
to watch tha Earth tumble out into space and explode into a nova/
enough HOVA's, imma pimp verses/
bullet riddled hearses, still leave curses/
hidden in tha sperm and, it's now a new generation/
runnin wit tha pace so my heart don't stop racin/
ragin against machines cause they can't be beat/
no mere mortal will except that fact of their defeat/
run through a portal, now i see ya'll demented/
tha light bent in closer to show me tha box i've been sent in/
i fit perfect, not a single molucule loose/
who knows jus which planet tha AI will choose/
to let me attack, no turnin back, this is tha track/
i've been stuck on my whole life, since tha very first act/

uppin...
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Old 09-04-03, 08:56 PM   #2
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damn, nice flow, alot of guys on these board have so much talent. keep dropping bruv
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Old 09-04-03, 09:23 PM   #3
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r ya'll gonna sleep on this shit like u do all my otha shit???...
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Old 09-04-03, 09:25 PM   #4
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yeh dawg, the flow was off a hook
nice vocab too!!!
keep droppin

check out my link, if ya haven't already

peace!
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Old 09-05-03, 10:57 AM   #5
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Old 09-05-03, 11:18 AM   #6
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gawd damn wat is up wit tha sleepin? UPPIN!!!!
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Old 09-05-03, 11:19 AM   #7
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favorable to nas style adressing evrything and nothing at once very well done wordplay is vscious and poetic stanza works well for oyu.
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Old 09-05-03, 11:26 AM   #8
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i liked ur flow, dat kept me boppin ma head and readin


you could work on da hook but otherwise than that


tight shit mayn, nice fuckin flow
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