Sarah
 

Sarah i know you dont go on here but this is for you.
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As you got off the train i couldn't believe my eyes ~
You were so Beautiful like an angel in disguise ~
I couldn't stop thinkin about you all the way home ~
but its ok coz you were with me so i wasn't alone ~
the night out was good, but the first kiss was amazin ~
it felt like a raging fire, and my heart was blazin ~
when we got home, to bed, an you went to sleep ~
I laid there for hours lookin at you, hours i want to keep ~
then i fell asleep, my brain filled with an amazing view ~
a view that'l never be erased, it was a view of you ~
we laid there all night and right throughout the day ~
just talking but there was somethin i wanted to say ~
i wanted to tell you how much i like you but i think you knew ~
i was afraid that i felt this way, you didn't feel the way i do ~
We spoke yesterday an i got it all out, you know how i feel ~
im writing this now so people know that my feelings are real ~
i asked a question, if you wanna stay friends or wot d'ya wanna do ~
you said you'd love to start seeing me, an now i all i want to say is.... thank you ~

A peace from the heart good most of the time. I felt you and i was able to feel how you feel. I can relate, such a feeling is so great. Nice peice, peace out

yeah i thought it was a good topic, the ending was nice, and i think the point your trying to get across is there, but i just wasnt feeling it, no hate or anything, just my opinion, i'm sure that if Sarah read it she'd love you for it! Keep Writing!

peace and love

yo nice piece, I can definitely relate to it, since me and my gurl were in a similar situation when we just started dating

when we got home, to bed, an you went to sleep ~
I laid there for hours lookin at you, hours i want to keep

^^^yo that was felt... know what ya mean
nice piece, straight from the heart, just honest feelings.
keep droppin, gud luck with ya gurl

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Thanx for the feedback ...

uppin this please ,, .. ,, ... ,,, ..

PzZ ...

Personal , deep , .....nice flow, .nice sheme.....good piece :) i liked it

Can u say somthing bout my short note book piece preciated :)