ok let me know what yall think or if you can relate
 

its kinda nuts they weight i hold on my sholders//
i walk threw the life which throws me bolders//
sometimes i wonder when is it all gonna stop//
when this life isn't gonna mold me to the person im not//
or morethenless the person i don't wanna be//
the person on this earth who i feel hates me//
lookin in the eyes of the devil is where i stand//
hes tuggin at my sould but jesus lent me an outstretched hand//
i wanna make it in this life i wanna purely last//
i reach for the hand of theSON, its just outta my grasp//
im moraly constricted, destined with failure//
this is the life i live, not a tale i tell ya//
if seen it all, lots of bullshit in my life//
ive seen the good side of bad, and friend drop like flys//
makes me wanna go head and give it up//
hittin the bottle of jack, i tip it up//
yall gotta feel me my soldiers been knocked down//
so imma keep spittin, till this ROOK, check mates the CROWN//(chess metaphor)
so imma step off this is just feeling to release lil sleep deprived//
its rainin, like ja said, it means that the MAN cried//


R.I.P. N.S. 9/13/02 we miss you, life still lives in our hearts, justice will percivier, or the barrel of the 380 will end the tears....my boy was murdered by 3 of his so called friends rais him up in your hearts, the killer/trigger man, is going to trial for capital punishment, leave some love for his behalf

sounds like you are talkin from personal experience, an emotional peice.................................KEEP SPITTIN...............HOLLA

thanks yall love the respect

i think you are really talented and i want to read more from you

easy to follow... simple style got the feelins across. Good piece for the circumstances tho i felt u coulda come stronger on the more emotional parts. Jus ma .02... coo piece tho nicca.

yo, though i cant say its elevated, i can say that this came from the heart, peices like this keep me reading. i feel ur flow, and ur style kinda reminds me of myself, nonetheless a deep heartfelt peice keep droppn bro. one.

thanks for the love yall, its cool

Yeah this peice was good, it was a good read overall i thought too, your flow was good, you had good wording, it was a emotional peice, overall id say it was pretty good drop, keep dropping.