its kinda nuts they weight i hold on my sholders//
i walk threw the life which throws me bolders//
sometimes i wonder when is it all gonna stop//
when this life isn't gonna mold me to the person im not//
or morethenless the person i don't wanna be//
the person on this earth who i feel hates me//
lookin in the eyes of the devil is where i stand//
hes tuggin at my sould but jesus lent me an outstretched hand//
i wanna make it in this life i wanna purely last//
i reach for the hand of theSON, its just outta my grasp//
im moraly constricted, destined with failure//
this is the life i live, not a tale i tell ya//
if seen it all, lots of bullshit in my life//
ive seen the good side of bad, and friend drop like flys//
makes me wanna go head and give it up//
hittin the bottle of jack, i tip it up//
yall gotta feel me my soldiers been knocked down//
so imma keep spittin, till this ROOK, check mates the CROWN//(chess metaphor)
so imma step off this is just feeling to release lil sleep deprived//
its rainin, like ja said, it means that the MAN cried//


R.I.P. N.S. 9/13/02 we miss you, life still lives in our hearts, justice will percivier, or the barrel of the 380 will end the tears....my boy was murdered by 3 of his so called friends rais him up in your hearts, the killer/trigger man, is going to trial for capital punishment, leave some love for his behalf

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you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot//
if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot//
what is you confused cant member which team you be with//
i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen//

sounds like you are talkin from personal experience, an emotional peice.................................KEEP SPITTIN...............HOLLA

thanks yall love the respect

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you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot//
if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot//
what is you confused cant member which team you be with//
i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen//

i think you are really talented and i want to read more from you

easy to follow... simple style got the feelins across. Good piece for the circumstances tho i felt u coulda come stronger on the more emotional parts. Jus ma .02... coo piece tho nicca.

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yo, though i cant say its elevated, i can say that this came from the heart, peices like this keep me reading. i feel ur flow, and ur style kinda reminds me of myself, nonetheless a deep heartfelt peice keep droppn bro. one.

thanks for the love yall, its cool

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you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot//
if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot//
what is you confused cant member which team you be with//
i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen//