insane dopeness
 

yo yo here goez i aint knowin if ya'll 50 cent and eminem punkz be feelin rhymez dis dope but if you izz den you in lizuck. tell me whatcha think

i aint gay
call me gay
ya'll gonna pay
how could i be gay?
i got a laday!
fo sheezy
ya'll take it eazy
cold wind be breezy
yo mama really skeezy
girl dont tease me
i kick yo dog
it ate my frog
i hit it with a log
threw tha body in a bog
then i ate your hog
and slaughtered your pig
that big was big
then i smoked a cigg
i hate shoes
that iz covered in booze
i broke a bottle on you head
yo, it bled red
my name aint ted
i'm driver, you a ped
put yo ta bed
where you belong
you girl wear a thong
dont take to long
when ya sing my song
tha other day
got a call from dre
said hey
write me a song, homay
i said 'fo sheez'
he said 'thanx and pleaze'
then i capped him in his knees
stole his car keys


peace

Ok...

You are officially in need of elevation.

You'll find it here if you want to.

This place is a good training ground.

Ya rhyme was elementary and silly but if it meant something to you, good.

That means ya might care enough to learn.

Welcome to RB.

thought it sounded like a kids poem, leaves alot to be desired
it was just so simple and basic it didn't work at all................peace

read others pick up a few tips on structure and word play etc

Re: insane dopeness
 

lmao pure hilarity..........................................
LMFAO literally......oh this is worth so many laughs.....but i dunno if u intended to be funny.........and if u didnt dude u need some serious help.......if u intended to be funny bah u need more work

I am thinking this person is one of the members from rb that just had the balls to trip.


Its ridiculous.


...But as for the "insane dopeness" that you did call it, It sounded like freeposts all over the forum combined in one open mic.



On the other hand if you just needed some help. Then Go Ask Methane. He can help.