Darkened Shadows.....facing fears
 

aight..

Picture 9 womens with 9 womens behind them
and behind them, There's 9 men with mind stems

Those mind stems broke bones bent like
spine bends
Spine bends were trends for my friends
and my friends had talks of ending my life then
so I ran for the trees and climbed them

When I climbed them I did not hesitate to look behind me
For days I would despise friends and write with my pen
Until my pen faded to blanks like blind men

....I finally gave up and faced the 9 Men
confidence built, knowing behind them was only the darkened shadows of 9 men

I liked this shit hoe...ya happy now?????? lol...anywayz...nice multi'z...and the story was dope diggity fresh...especially for a slut like yaself...hoe...lol...holla at one of my sexy piecez that you ain't been in yet now...

hey nice drop and wordplay..along wit the vocab but hey return the favor and check out the battle between swift and yog_dogg

i was feelin that, topic was hella original, i thought the multis were tight as fuck, i was also feelin ur vocab and wordplay, not to much, but not to little, that was nice, ur flow stayed on target throughout the post, keep postin dude, i was feelin that.

yo if u have the time can u hit up this battle wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84781
itd be much apprecieated.

peace.......

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the concept/message, is Whoa! clever,....nice man ....

I dont think many peeps get it ^^

good one....^^

tight ass drop, nice flows and wordplay and vocab, keep that shit comin

that shit kicked ass
keep em comin
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yeah dog i this was a lil fire
you used multis, metaphors made me think

Nice worplay and flow.
Sounded more like a poem to me tho. But that might be becuzz how u have it sectioned into stanzas.
Nice rap, I can't say much about it cuzz I don't care for the soul rap.