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10-11-03, 04:32 AM
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Darkened Shadows.....facing fears
IP: A10D 4933
aight..
Picture 9 womens with 9 womens behind them and behind them, There's 9 men with mind stems Those mind stems broke bones bent like spine bends Spine bends were trends for my friends and my friends had talks of ending my life then so I ran for the trees and climbed them When I climbed them I did not hesitate to look behind me For days I would despise friends and write with my pen Until my pen faded to blanks like blind men ....I finally gave up and faced the 9 Men confidence built, knowing behind them was only the darkened shadows of 9 men
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10-11-03, 04:48 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I liked this shit hoe...ya happy now?????? lol...anywayz...nice multi'z...and the story was dope diggity fresh...especially for a slut like yaself...hoe...lol...holla at one of my sexy piecez that you ain't been in yet now...
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10-11-03, 01:19 PM
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IP: 5AE9 0D41
hey nice drop and wordplay..along wit the vocab but hey return the favor and check out the battle between swift and yog_dogg
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10-11-03, 01:29 PM
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Banned for being stupid
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IP: 95C5 EAD6
i was feelin that, topic was hella original, i thought the multis were tight as fuck, i was also feelin ur vocab and wordplay, not to much, but not to little, that was nice, ur flow stayed on target throughout the post, keep postin dude, i was feelin that.
yo if u have the time can u hit up this battle wit an honest vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84781 itd be much apprecieated. peace....... |
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10-11-03, 03:15 PM
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IP: FF40 570D
LOOOLLLLL
the concept/message, is Whoa! clever,....nice man .... I dont think many peeps get it ^^ good one....^^
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10-11-03, 11:43 PM
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IP: 5AE9 0D41
tight ass drop, nice flows and wordplay and vocab, keep that shit comin
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10-13-03, 01:29 AM
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BANNED - LOSER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
that shit kicked ass
keep em comin <~~~~~~~> |
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10-13-03, 02:44 AM
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IP: 9EBD 5113
yeah dog i this was a lil fire
you used multis, metaphors made me think
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10-13-03, 02:48 AM
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IP: 5CB8 BDE0
Nice worplay and flow.
Sounded more like a poem to me tho. But that might be becuzz how u have it sectioned into stanzas. Nice rap, I can't say much about it cuzz I don't care for the soul rap. |
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