Worthy (First Audio) Crit appreciated
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/biasimusic.htm


Its a short track called Worthy, not too good quality

I got a Sheffiled UK accent (wonder how much rip ill get for this from u US people)

Crit appreciated!

ANy Crit Please!

lol...i know this beat...shit is tight...yo, ya flow...you need to pronounciate & spit wit more feelings...and yea you right about the quality...shit keeps cuttin out...anyway, if you stepped up ya intensity and mic presence you could rip some shit...cuz ya accent aint that strong so you could really flip some words...but yea...quality was ass, lyrics were aiiiiiight...you need structure work, and pronounciation..but keep droppin...


.peace.

Much appreciated mate, im makin my own beats now or starting out so no more of other beats

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87504

Very much appreciated again mate.

are you a chipmunk?

lol,

I know i got a lot to work on, thats why i need crit, the higher Pitch was an experiment. Another track should come soon, im tryin making beats too now, im a newb at that too though, posted it here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87504

Cheers anyway