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10-22-03, 01:44 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Worthy (First Audio) Crit appreciated
IP: 509D 5063
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/biasimusic.htm
Its a short track called Worthy, not too good quality I got a Sheffiled UK accent (wonder how much rip ill get for this from u US people) Crit appreciated! |
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10-24-03, 08:36 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
ANy Crit Please!
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10-24-03, 03:33 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 736F 5A0F
lol...i know this beat...shit is tight...yo, ya flow...you need to pronounciate & spit wit more feelings...and yea you right about the quality...shit keeps cuttin out...anyway, if you stepped up ya intensity and mic presence you could rip some shit...cuz ya accent aint that strong so you could really flip some words...but yea...quality was ass, lyrics were aiiiiiight...you need structure work, and pronounciation..but keep droppin...
.peace.
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10-30-03, 12:55 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Much appreciated mate, im makin my own beats now or starting out so no more of other beats
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87504 Very much appreciated again mate. |
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10-30-03, 01:24 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: C9E3 41C0
are you a chipmunk?
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10-31-03, 07:47 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
lol,
I know i got a lot to work on, thats why i need crit, the higher Pitch was an experiment. Another track should come soon, im tryin making beats too now, im a newb at that too though, posted it here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87504 Cheers anyway |
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