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regarless
ermurges that kid who curses//
verse written from a bottle of serm ,i learn quik// hotter than burnt splifs, blud ill ave u nervous// I'm on sum berserk shit an jus 4 the purpose of making u hot, Ill throw ya body in a burning furnest// I got churches praising my name// U dissing wit claims dat grammars spitting is lame // I rip written's whilst der still in ya brain// Slitting pulmonary veins//, And choke ya neck till the blud pressure busting ya brain// "Come again Man what u r saying?"// I got Lyrics so hot dat the inks busting in flames// When is come 2 murdered emcees im the person 2 blame// , I got the next boy saying"blud, dat shi is insane" // Rhymes u cant explain like David Blane// Ya pussy's are sore i exert the major pain// Ya style is bait I cum to wrecks sound// U cud amputate my legs n i still wont step down// wit imageries of emcee murked instantly// from worst verse a chruch hyme will seem like a and best assume that your in doom i aint kiding G// ill hurl abuse at ya wound jus to add insult 2 injury// obviously the hot mc dropping properly// fakes cant touch me thats like hittin the lottrey// mics holding stiff wit a choking grip// holding wit the cooldest spits like notrh pole u better persume or just know its this flow is sick// bitch u aint a bone to pick more like slowly stiff hand stroking dick// ive taking over this , hijacking mics fuck a hostage// im ripping up tracks just 2 cut ya losses// chorous grammer spitts the hits regardless very invasional, spits are heartless grammer spitts the hits regardless very invasional, spits are heartless this heres a grammer lesson near ya amergedan , u recalecting i ave ya whole manner trecking ill make ya bitch suck my prick withour an erection jus 2 soften the blow// its often i flow ,blatent sparks if thiers i battle im taking part// u better act like transplant and have change of heart// thats the first reason why i murked weaklings // my verse got u believing in the possibilities of peeps wit impaired speech speaking// From the dirt I resurrect deceased men // i battle your verse before it even enter your cerebrum// Crush ya lungs while u still breathing // Slit u so fast the sieves healing b4 u start bleeding// Receiving medical treatments, so wat!// i so hot my dad experienced burn from his semen// a demon murking wit swords// Beating me is like finding a virgin in a maternity ward// Got u shook like vibraters Pull out ya spinal cord// cus I get u back treaver vs moe shalter// Clapped wit an iron , an stitch u wit an old stapler// My flows greater U getting boot fully n i scar menny // Truths gully im beating more yout pussys dan r.keely// And I probably be fazing rocs wit amazing props// Blatant hot as I crotch Akz an taken shots and each member of blazin squad// Knock emcees, u might as well copy my rhymes// cus dat the only way u ever spit superior lines// Envy is heavy this shits going deeper than time // I cut out ya brain jus so i can get a piece of ya mind// So what's the score, I'm morbid // U bun wit four clips, more raw shit// Floored to the floor by 84 2 by 4 board hitz// Ya spinal cord ripped, ill jack ya shoe// Use the Nike tick to slice your whore wit// Running u over wit a ford escort bitch// Fucking jacking cars I go 4-air concord jets/// |
real tight, nice vocab
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you utilized every element and gave this its own attitude tight idea
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Yeah this wuz nice, i like your use of multis, u definitely got a lot of potential, keep spittin, u got a different kinda flow, nice drop 8.5/10/
PS- read and critique CHOKEDOGG aka Youngnut |
yeh thankz , for the feed back , i did make few mistakes when i was writting but u still get the point innit
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