ermurges that kid who curses//
verse written from a bottle of serm ,i learn quik//
hotter than burnt splifs, blud ill ave u nervous//
I'm on sum berserk shit an jus 4 the purpose of making u hot,
Ill throw ya body in a burning furnest//
I got churches praising my name//
U dissing wit claims dat grammars spitting is lame //
I rip written's whilst der still in ya brain//
Slitting pulmonary veins//,
And choke ya neck till the blud pressure busting ya brain//
"Come again Man what u r saying?"//
I got Lyrics so hot dat the inks busting in flames//
When is come 2 murdered emcees im the person 2 blame//
, I got the next boy saying"blud, dat shi is insane" //
Rhymes u cant explain like David Blane//
Ya pussy's are sore i exert the major pain//
Ya style is bait I cum to wrecks sound//
U cud amputate my legs n i still wont step down//
wit imageries of emcee murked instantly//
from worst verse a chruch hyme will seem like a
and best assume that your in doom i aint kiding G//
ill hurl abuse at ya wound jus to add insult 2 injury//
obviously the hot mc dropping properly//
fakes cant touch me thats like hittin the lottrey//
mics holding stiff wit a choking grip//
holding wit the cooldest spits like notrh pole
u better persume or just know its this flow is sick//
bitch u aint a bone to pick
more like slowly stiff hand stroking dick//
ive taking over this , hijacking mics fuck a hostage//
im ripping up tracks just 2 cut ya losses//
chorous
grammer spitts the hits regardless
very invasional, spits are heartless
grammer spitts the hits regardless
very invasional, spits are heartless
this heres a grammer lesson
near ya amergedan , u recalecting
i ave ya whole manner trecking

ill make ya bitch suck my prick withour an erection jus 2 soften the blow//
its often i flow ,blatent sparks if thiers i battle im taking part//
u better act like transplant and have change of heart//
thats the first reason why i murked weaklings //
my verse got u believing in the possibilities of peeps wit impaired speech speaking//
From the dirt I resurrect deceased men //
i battle your verse before it even enter your cerebrum//
Crush ya lungs while u still breathing //
Slit u so fast the sieves healing b4 u start bleeding//
Receiving medical treatments, so wat!//
i so hot my dad experienced burn from his semen//
a demon murking wit swords//
Beating me is like finding a virgin in a maternity ward//
Got u shook like vibraters
Pull out ya spinal cord//
cus I get u back treaver vs moe shalter//
Clapped wit an iron , an stitch u wit an old stapler//
My flows greater
U getting boot fully n i scar menny //
Truths gully im beating more yout pussys dan r.keely//
And I probably be fazing rocs wit amazing props//
Blatant hot as I crotch Akz an taken shots and each member of blazin squad//
Knock emcees, u might as well copy my rhymes//
cus dat the only way u ever spit superior lines//
Envy is heavy this shits going deeper than time //
I cut out ya brain jus so i can get a piece of ya mind//
So what's the score, I'm morbid //
U bun wit four clips, more raw shit//
Floored to the floor by 84 2 by 4 board hitz//
Ya spinal cord ripped, ill jack ya shoe//
Use the Nike tick to slice your whore wit//
Running u over wit a ford escort bitch//
Fucking jacking cars I go 4-air concord jets///

real tight, nice vocab

peace

you utilized every element and gave this its own attitude tight idea

Yeah this wuz nice, i like your use of multis, u definitely got a lot of potential, keep spittin, u got a different kinda flow, nice drop 8.5/10/

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