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Nok N Funn Demmental - HMP P.O.W
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93042 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93234 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92620 Chorus Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now? I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how (X2) Funn Dementall'z verse My convicted back creasing the soiled cotton, that forms a mattress/ Staling porridge, behind iron doors that are paid by you in taxes/ My heart an lungs burning, condensing with my cigarette ashes/ Restless hands, across the walls I graffiti the word fascist/ I write letters, but it seems the wardens seem to refuse to deliver/ No replies, like what I know… I’m just a dumb nigger/ That’s what dem pigs keep telling’ me, But I stay focus on bursting my blister/ Coz my conscience keep tellin’ me, “you go down, they go wit ya/ Excluded from society… behind the lofty walls of prison/ They give me condoms… but I don’t see no women/ Positive memories, the only thing that keeps me living/ So I ‘workout’, while I try to ‘workout’ why I did wrong/ While the guards work out on nightshifts, I sleep with the soap in my clenched fist, keepin’ my head strong/ Chorus Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now? I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how (X2) Nok'd Verse Covicted of a crime I didn't commit...I'd inform if I could But if when I get out if I inform...My life's over for good If I could, I'd fly away...Break away from these cell bars The pprison yards a warzone...Fightin, prove that ya hard At times ya gotta fight...Prove that you won't take shit Cos if I take a little bit...Your life? That's the end of it Men takin beatin's and rape in the shower...Daddy's lil boyz I'd rather die at the hands of another man...Never employ Myself as a dick rider just to get an easy prison time But at times I began to find salvatiuon in my rhymes Began Rappin...Me and Bobby Eastwood Spiitin hot flows Kept us from the bigger boyz...Recordin in the Studio's That was my salvation...That was the way I coped And as time went by. . . I never once felt false hope I had staged fights....My record was 10-3...Only lost 3 Against the Older ladz in Juvenile detenton Unit C Chorus Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now? I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how (X2) NOK N FUNN DEMENTALL REPPIN UK>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
Nok, you spelt my name wrong, fuck it... I think we did alrite, uppin' for feed bk!!!
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I'll change ya name right
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Yo this shit's hot...None o' my business but u boyz been inside?......Anyways some graphic linez and deep shit. Keep on doin your thing, both your verses seemed to have a positive message in negative surroundings from the way that you keep yourself strong.
Respect and Peace |
Thanx, I been jail an not prision... Last year's Halloween, for sum minor shit though, but dam dem cells fuckin' get to you
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aight nice piece frmo ma boy nok'd...nok'd had to pick up the soap wen he was in prison in strangeways...nah but all jokin aside the hook was nice..there was a nice flow and the story was a good visual..jus try to extend ya vocab to make it that more complex
rating=8/10 pz oh ya funn you 4got to poll on ma battle with Aragorn..the link is in ma sig pz |
ha ha..........what ya get arrested for?????????nah I ain't been inside.......just gud at envizionin....had some family members anbd heard their stories
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NICE SHIT CUZ
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My bredrin tried to jack sum skate boarders an they called the police, No body (for sum reason) wanted to split up. We got on the bus an a police car stopped it an we all got arrested!!!
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uppin'
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A good collab. Although, Funn was writing about gettin justice and Nok was writing about being hard? Haha. Good though i must say. Good drop. Holla Peace
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I'd like to uppin' dis (Funn DementaLL's bk on a different account)
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