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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93042

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93234

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92620



Chorus

Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard
Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard
Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now?
I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how
(X2)

Funn Dementall'z verse

My convicted back creasing the soiled cotton, that forms a mattress/
Staling porridge, behind iron doors that are paid by you in taxes/
My heart an lungs burning, condensing with my cigarette ashes/
Restless hands, across the walls I graffiti the word fascist/
I write letters, but it seems the wardens seem to refuse to deliver/
No replies, like what I know… I’m just a dumb nigger/
That’s what dem pigs keep telling’ me,
But I stay focus on bursting my blister/
Coz my conscience keep tellin’ me, “you go down, they go wit ya/
Excluded from society… behind the lofty walls of prison/
They give me condoms… but I don’t see no women/
Positive memories, the only thing that keeps me living/
So I ‘workout’, while I try to ‘workout’ why I did wrong/
While the guards work out on nightshifts,
I sleep with the soap in my clenched fist, keepin’ my head strong/

Chorus

Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard
Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard
Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now?
I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how
(X2)

Nok'd Verse

Covicted of a crime I didn't commit...I'd inform if I could
But if when I get out if I inform...My life's over for good
If I could, I'd fly away...Break away from these cell bars
The pprison yards a warzone...Fightin, prove that ya hard
At times ya gotta fight...Prove that you won't take shit
Cos if I take a little bit...Your life? That's the end of it
Men takin beatin's and rape in the shower...Daddy's lil boyz
I'd rather die at the hands of another man...Never employ
Myself as a dick rider just to get an easy prison time
But at times I began to find salvatiuon in my rhymes
Began Rappin...Me and Bobby Eastwood Spiitin hot flows
Kept us from the bigger boyz...Recordin in the Studio's
That was my salvation...That was the way I coped
And as time went by. . . I never once felt false hope
I had staged fights....My record was 10-3...Only lost 3
Against the Older ladz in Juvenile detenton Unit C

Chorus

Locked down in HMP...Life's gettin Fuckin Hard
Have to prove ya not a pussy...Fights in the prison yard
Life's gettin stressed...Should I end my chapter now?
I gotta get over the feelin...Help me find sanity,some how
(X2)











NOK N FUNN DEMENTALL REPPIN UK>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Nok, you spelt my name wrong, fuck it... I think we did alrite, uppin' for feed bk!!!

I'll change ya name right

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Really need a vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92451

uppin'

Yo this shit's hot...None o' my business but u boyz been inside?......Anyways some graphic linez and deep shit. Keep on doin your thing, both your verses seemed to have a positive message in negative surroundings from the way that you keep yourself strong.

Respect and Peace

Thanx, I been jail an not prision... Last year's Halloween, for sum minor shit though, but dam dem cells fuckin' get to you
(me bein' crostophobic)

aight nice piece frmo ma boy nok'd...nok'd had to pick up the soap wen he was in prison in strangeways...nah but all jokin aside the hook was nice..there was a nice flow and the story was a good visual..jus try to extend ya vocab to make it that more complex
rating=8/10
pz

oh ya funn you 4got to poll on ma battle with Aragorn..the link is in ma sig pz

ha ha..........what ya get arrested for?????????nah I ain't been inside.......just gud at envizionin....had some family members anbd heard their stories

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NICE SHIT CUZ

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My bredrin tried to jack sum skate boarders an they called the police, No body (for sum reason) wanted to split up. We got on the bus an a police car stopped it an we all got arrested!!!

uppin'

A good collab. Although, Funn was writing about gettin justice and Nok was writing about being hard? Haha. Good though i must say. Good drop. Holla Peace

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