People talkin/ not sayin nothing
 

My replies:
Influence/Eleete
Early/Handcuffs
Respect me/ MP~PHASIZ

People always talking about the bullets they sprayin
Braggin about the idol god's of wich they prayin
Keep on lock the vest they wearin
And the anger of god that keeps em fearin
It keeps them from the goal, I see this and avoid the mistake
I'm playin for my soul, and that's the highest stake

CHORUS:
I don't need nobody to take my back
Gaurantee I always stay strapped
I don't need a gat and a bullet
I just need a fist I don't got to move to pull it

People always fakin the cash flow, like dey pockets never run low
Boastin about the mansions dey buildin, and the cars dey buyin
What about the welfare check, you cashed last week
The debts you stay payin off, the free money u'll always seek
Never met nobody in the laps of luxury, It'll happen 4 me someday
Got 2 make sure it don't fill me w/fury, so I can make it to payday

CHORUS:
I don't need nobody to take my back
Gaurantee I always stay strapped
I don't need a gat and a bullet
I just need a fist I don't got to move to pull it

People always say you can never have 2 few, in ur crew
Talkin about wigger if you only knew,
Never mention that wifie, and best homie weren't true
That 2 many ppl write hard rhymes, about tru hard tyms lived thru
Life is hard Im the first 2 admit, keep my head up my star ill b lit
Mortal bodies ain't enugh 2 liv thru it, Pray 2 God my soul ill be fit

I didnt really get the impression that this came from your heart, that might just be me. But anyway this was good but nothin special....the verses need to be longer other than that your flow was Ok and your vocab was good but the verse length didnt do you any favours.
No hate but I wasnt really feelin this....5/10

word u can't win all fans it is from the heart i don't like rappers who constantly talk about their money or there beefs they got why not talk about real life ya herd. pz and love