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12-01-03, 12:33 PM | #1 | |||||||
Flyweight
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People talkin/ not sayin nothing
IP: D85C 59A5
My replies:
Influence/Eleete Early/Handcuffs Respect me/ MP~PHASIZ People always talking about the bullets they sprayin Braggin about the idol god's of wich they prayin Keep on lock the vest they wearin And the anger of god that keeps em fearin It keeps them from the goal, I see this and avoid the mistake I'm playin for my soul, and that's the highest stake CHORUS: I don't need nobody to take my back Gaurantee I always stay strapped I don't need a gat and a bullet I just need a fist I don't got to move to pull it People always fakin the cash flow, like dey pockets never run low Boastin about the mansions dey buildin, and the cars dey buyin What about the welfare check, you cashed last week The debts you stay payin off, the free money u'll always seek Never met nobody in the laps of luxury, It'll happen 4 me someday Got 2 make sure it don't fill me w/fury, so I can make it to payday CHORUS: I don't need nobody to take my back Gaurantee I always stay strapped I don't need a gat and a bullet I just need a fist I don't got to move to pull it People always say you can never have 2 few, in ur crew Talkin about wigger if you only knew, Never mention that wifie, and best homie weren't true That 2 many ppl write hard rhymes, about tru hard tyms lived thru Life is hard Im the first 2 admit, keep my head up my star ill b lit Mortal bodies ain't enugh 2 liv thru it, Pray 2 God my soul ill be fit
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17 16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases 17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him 18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper- 19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life 20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish |
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12-01-03, 12:51 PM | #2 | |||||||
Drop Of Genius
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IP: 9B8E 4D92
I didnt really get the impression that this came from your heart, that might just be me. But anyway this was good but nothin special....the verses need to be longer other than that your flow was Ok and your vocab was good but the verse length didnt do you any favours.
No hate but I wasnt really feelin this....5/10 |
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12-01-03, 04:34 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: D85C 59A5
word u can't win all fans it is from the heart i don't like rappers who constantly talk about their money or there beefs they got why not talk about real life ya herd. pz and love
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17 16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases 17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him 18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper- 19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life 20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish |
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