Nuclear Concept Presents: A True Nigga
 

I dont need anti-biotics to feel no pain/
The shit I spit would make Maryln Manson look sane/
Rap is like weed something I crave/
It seems like every other nigga tries to put me in my grave/
Im not afraid of death, if someone pulls the teck, I wont run/
But thats why the only person I know is my self cuz I dont trust noone/
Other rappers thinkin we cool, until I hit em with disses/
Some niggas rat me out, but I got slugs snitches/
Hopin someone would kill me before I got to them/
But noone could fulfilll their wishes/
I get hit with slugs but stay kickin/
just for the simple pleasure of puttin the glock to the back of they heads an sayin, "Guess what, Im alive bitches!"/
Some of you claimin to be gangsta or thugs, well I am and I know it/
The way you rhyme sumtimes I have to think your a poet/
But Im fine where I am cuz I dont have one insecurity/
About my identity/
Cuz I'll always stay true, even if one day I were to get the fame and wealth/
I'll never be fake, cuz I'll always look in the mirror and be able to recognize my self/

2 short but other then that i like it maybe be more graphic

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But this was ok....kinda short like Word said...but your structure could use some work though...some of your lines were stretched out there, should try to shorten them up a bit, cause it took away from the flow in this....but just keep at it.

thx for the feedback.
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it was a ight keystyle flow was good wordplay ight vocab ok multis and punches ok over all 7.2/10

AAAIght, not ill. Good basic verse structure, just lacked in vo cab and creativity. Keep it up son. Toner Rating 6.5/10

Peace