[Bash.]
 

Bash,

This is straight of dope harder, Paying my dew
Your a fuckin' eye lash barber, Cuttin' the 'I do'
Out of your raps, Your back with a ghost write
Now when you write personal, you write ghost
A mic hoax, Are you a hulk? Well your a bama
Bash's is more plain than a hanger, Grammar
Is more choppy than a herb with Jamie Oliver
Take a screen test, Your a ganitor monitor
You contrast met-a-for like fans of the police
Its a law you can't have Po-Lease ' Dis-Six '
I'm proving you can bury someone. . In One
So I've Eaten You, and that was only One In
I'm like foster parents, Potents now Sonnin'

Bye.

dis was a good short piece.
nice structure and wordplay, the flow was a bit hard for me to catch in areas, but keep it up

hit my rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98014

cheers

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9724#post979724

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9736#post979736

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9745#post979745

ight, i thought the length of this piece could have been stretched out a bit coz it would av been good to read more.

Out of your raps, Your back with a ghost write
Now when you write personal, you write ghost

i liked this line especially as the ending to both sentences i thought were very good, although it didnt rhyme.

a few good multis and vocab was average in here.
6/10
hows dat.

loose ass punches. I expected something better for a diss drop, but oh well keep dropping.

eh..well...........It wasnt your best from all the things I've seen by you. It was okay. Kinda had kiddy punches but....to put it simple, it sounded liek a newbs verse. No hate or anything, just had to be honest. I know you can do better pot1ent keep spittin.

This was a decent diss..i followed it fine....Nice drop not much more to say...

-1-

Not A Bad Diss Po, Probly Coulda Been Longer. Flow Was Good. Punches You Had In There Didn't Really Hit Hard Enough Though.

You contrast met-a-for like fans of the police
Its a law you can't have Po-Lease ' Dis-Six '
^ ^ ^ Ill Wordplay.

Keep Um Comin Po.

-Formula.

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Pretty good flow.. Not long enuff, I thought it was a pretty good drop jus not long enuff..

PO YOU ARE ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND YOU KNOW THIS BUT THIS LACKED HARDCORE NOTHING STOOD OUT AS FAR AS DISSESS AND OVERALL IT SEAMED VERY AMATUER......JUST BEING HONEST BROTHER

i gotta agree, this wasn't up to ya usual standard..lacking in ways......ya last drop was much better..this jus seemed put together, just wrote with out thinking...thats my opinion anyways.....pZ...