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Forum: Textual Releases 02-15-04, 03:01 PM |
Replies: 5
Views: 274
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Khôi NguJin
it's kind of easy to grasp this....i can't...
it's kind of easy to grasp this....i can't believe ya'll can't......i know theres a lot....but the main theme is just right in front of your face.... It starts out, winter night, the guy begins to... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-15-04, 02:19 PM |
Replies: 5
Views: 274
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Khôi NguJin
One Man on the Ground
Just try to understand it.... It was late 'n made, the kids were full of amazement A chilling winter night, slowly moving the pavement Little bits of ice were pounding down on it blatant Several... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-15-04, 02:17 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 231
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Khôi NguJin
you had some pretty cool ideas and good flow in...
you had some pretty cool ideas and good flow in this...you kept it real man...somewhat went off....but it was a good read.....i can see some improvement in u with some multis here and some internals... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-15-04, 02:12 PM |
Replies: 4
Views: 232
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Khôi NguJin
you needa improve in masses dukes....
work on...
you needa improve in masses dukes.... work on some wordplay...get somethin witty....you need approaching starts.... its just soooo wack with all that filler....hit me up sometime for some help or... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-14-04, 02:01 PM |
Replies: 1
Views: 338
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
Daemon
Grind them away, grind them away.. Settle it down, set it all straight Please help me, save me, I promise to pray For my souls sake, each honest mistake - That I made, forsaken, I`ll stay on... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-14-04, 02:00 PM |
Replies: 4
Views: 371
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
nice emotions...dope stuff...i felt this...
nice emotions...dope stuff...i felt this one...lots of dope ideas portrayed.... 1. |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-14-04, 01:58 PM |
Replies: 17
Views: 487
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
wow mass props on this....it was almost fire...
wow mass props on this....it was almost fire stuf....damn nice imagery and just ill...i was feelin this a lot..stay up guys.... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-07-04, 01:30 PM |
Replies: 1
Views: 225
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
Wow...
Thats all i got to say..
Wow....
kids...
Wow... Thats all i got to say.. Wow.... kids better peep this... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 05:47 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 273
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Khôi NguJin
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Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 02:26 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 273
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
'Saving Face'
The victory has been declared as the U.S. defeats Their rival adversaries, and now has the rights To pursue the freedoms they've been aspiring All of these countless years.. First there was a... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 02:25 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 236
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
flow was ill..you have OM's on lock, if u can...
flow was ill..you have OM's on lock, if u can just express wit more emotion and a more unique writing style..this was a nice piece though, felt it.. props. |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 02:24 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 215
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
didnt really feel it, i hate pieces like...
didnt really feel it, i hate pieces like this...all praising yourself and how good you are...but how can u back any of that up in reality lol...just write truth not this. peace. |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 02:23 PM |
Replies: 5
Views: 274
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
this was dope...
flow was really good, and the...
this was dope... flow was really good, and the whole thing was just very solid. i felt the unique writers voice in this, i can tell u had a lot of fun wit it...this was long but worth the... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 12:18 AM |
Replies: 1
Views: 171
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
Stars - Sun n' The Moon
Pure elements - all evident when crystilized developing Three of them - i'll relish em' - behaviors malevolent Call it my glow - shine to remind - rewinding the time Changing my range - all... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 12:16 AM |
Replies: 15
Views: 288
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
damn...not even a look...
this deserves some...
damn...not even a look... this deserves some peeps, cause it was actually pretty dope.... needs work on flow...but man...i see dopeness... i see how its all dimensions of skill...dope..i hope its... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 12:13 AM |
Replies: 2
Views: 151
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
good for beginnin..
dope cause....you aren't...
good for beginnin.. dope cause....you aren't cocky which is a plus...i see potential... adding multis....a unique flow and scheme..and your set... props. |
Forum: Topical 101 01-07-04, 04:59 PM |
Replies: 13
Views: 7,115
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
i won't be able to drop a verse...sorry..
just...
i won't be able to drop a verse...sorry.. just too busy... |
Forum: Topical 101 01-03-04, 11:26 PM |
Replies: 45
Sticky: Topical 101 - Rules
Views: 6,348
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Forum: Topical 101 01-03-04, 12:43 PM |
Replies: 13
Views: 7,115
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Forum: Topical 101 01-02-04, 01:54 PM |
Replies: 45
Sticky: Topical 101 - Rules
Views: 6,348
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
lol i thought this shit was a league....3
o...
lol i thought this shit was a league....3 o well.... so i gotta post a verse in barons match? |
Forum: Topical 101 01-02-04, 01:19 PM |
Replies: 45
Sticky: Topical 101 - Rules
Views: 6,348
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
yo peep...i need to start writing more..so i...
yo peep...i need to start writing more..so i hadda join... so sand...ya puttin me in for next week right... |
Forum: Topical 101 01-01-04, 03:59 PM |
Replies: 45
Sticky: Topical 101 - Rules
Views: 6,348
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Forum: Topical 101 01-01-04, 01:58 PM |
Replies: 45
Sticky: Topical 101 - Rules
Views: 6,348
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Forum: Textual Releases 09-23-03, 07:44 PM |
Replies: 4
Views: 261
Posted By
Khôi NguJin
Walking On Water Feat. steezus
i think ...Taking a picture and then translating to words.. Can take years of interpretation explaining it's worth And when you understand the complexity of my whole You can begin to realize the... |
Forum: Textual Releases 09-23-03, 07:33 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 186
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