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Forum: Introduce Yourself
12-30-06, 09:59 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 263
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Sykill
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Forum: Introduce Yourself
12-11-06, 11:33 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 319
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-27-06, 06:57 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
03-26-06, 05:50 PM
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Replies: 2
BATTLE: Sykill vs H.D.
Views: 268
Posted By
Sykill
Sykill vs H.D.
Battle Rules: 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Snap Flash Bang Minimum posts to vote: 20 |
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
03-23-06, 11:38 PM
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Replies: 10
BATTLE: Po'etiquette vs Sykill
Views: 2,235
Posted By
Sykill
I sat at the corner of the street, the writer...
I sat at the corner of the street, the writer abode My hand sketch nonsense at the end Of all my epileptic episodes... I finally wrote directions To section of my thoughts and find a way off... |
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
03-23-06, 11:05 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 199
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
03-23-06, 06:50 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 139
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-23-06, 06:30 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
03-23-06, 06:26 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 164
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-21-06, 07:29 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
03-08-06, 07:49 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 510
Posted By
Sykill
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223367 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222994 |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
03-08-06, 07:48 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,681
Posted By
Sykill
What I liked about the piece was the interjection...
What I liked about the piece was the interjection of speech by other characters. i feel the holocaust comparison was very strong and very well done. The whole piece was able to convey a message of... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
03-08-06, 07:44 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,282
Posted By
Sykill
Hmmm I really didnt notice the ABAB untill much...
Hmmm I really didnt notice the ABAB untill much later in the piece which is a good thing. I mean it really had a great spoken word feel though it was in rhyme. Topic matter was good but your metas... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
03-08-06, 07:35 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 510
Posted By
Sykill
The Messiah Framed In The Clock
The Messiah Framed In The Clock Foreword: Time has past but I have forgotten how to change. Thus it has stood still For me atleast The minutes ticked by over and over again Waiting for the hour to... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-08-06, 07:08 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 244
Posted By
Sykill
There were some multies but theyre could be some...
There were some multies but theyre could be some more in the piece. Overall I think it was pretty good. You can improve by making a bit more complex scheme. I hope you decided to explore more topics... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-08-06, 07:02 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By
Sykill
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-05-06, 08:50 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 617
Posted By
Sykill
Overall an okay piece. I get the message and the...
Overall an okay piece. I get the message and the overall vibe of it which is a good thing. I think the rhyme was pretty good and flowed well throughout. Structure isnt as bad as you think it is. ONE... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-05-06, 08:03 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By
Sykill
Cerberus
[Phil] Their soul hacked to pieces, with the blades still in place Date raped virgins put together with masking tape Blood oozes from their fate, and drips to the floor For excellent pan sauce?... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-05-06, 07:31 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 716
Posted By
Sykill
Yeah feels like I've read this before....
Yeah feels like I've read this before. Technically this was good and I hope you put a more concrete story in the next part. I loved the multies and such. Hope your next part is a bit longer and has... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-05-06, 07:26 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 530
Posted By
Sykill
Yeah wuestion god and believing in him are on two...
Yeah wuestion god and believing in him are on two sides of the coin and reveal confusion. Im glad you played into this in your piece and everything is in context. You can make your rhyme more complex... |
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Forum: Introduce Yourself
02-26-06, 12:05 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 273
Posted By
Sykill
Hmmm Maybe Man. I think i remember an Arsenic....
Hmmm Maybe Man. I think i remember an Arsenic. But wut up fam. Whut site you from? |
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Forum: Linguistic Expressions
02-25-06, 08:46 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 963
Posted By
Sykill
AIM:Sam Was Hurr
Email: sampad4@yahoo.com
Whut...
AIM:Sam Was Hurr Email: sampad4@yahoo.com Whut up DQ long time no talk! |
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Forum: Introduce Yourself
02-25-06, 08:41 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 273
Posted By
Sykill
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