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07-31-05, 07:40 PM
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GG Haterz
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soul?uest vs The Revelation
IP: 45EA 77CF
Topical Rules: 20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding (Taking my idea) Topic: Unseen Reflection Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 08-03-05 at 07:40 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - old battle - tie This Battle Is Now Closed
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07-31-05, 08:53 PM
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IP: EE4D 42B7
soul?uest has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 08:53 PM.
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08-01-05, 12:03 PM
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#3
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IP: EC9E 2798
The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 12:03 PM.
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08-03-05, 03:03 AM
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IP: EE4D 42B7
sitting in the darkness at 7:15 PM on a Sunday,
that’s god’s day…but outside I hear the gunplay, listen to the birds and the whining windy afternoon, my face hot because my dreams focused on you, I cant seem to shake this feeling that im not alone, in my own home im afraid…gotta act completely grown, my fears touch the spine and tingles send shivers, fingertips finding my hand and your lips quiver, pulls me from the form-fitting recliner I occupy, why try to hide the signs…you know I want to cry, looking into the mirror looming over the kitchen sink, I can feel my own eyes prying and I try not to think, fall back to the days before she knew what was going on, the green grass held promise when I mowed the lawn, found the meaning of true life in those fateful three words, I love you…that mouth kisses air as you clean the herbs, cooking up a storm I can smell Sicily in the air, reminding me of home and how my mother resides there, wishing I knew exactly what to speak to your ears, hiding in the red hair that’s endeavoring to steal your tears, why is it that we both cry as the sky blues outside, wishing I could make you see what im feeling and why, but now it’s a lost cause…when I gaze into that mirror again, I see the son I never met…lost my reflection at 6:34 PM… once again. goodluck. quick key before bed. |
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08-03-05, 01:53 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: FE62 2C46
I wander through the valley deciding my mind Why do people act like there's nothing behind? Are they afraid of the truth and hide behind lies, Or are they just trying to pick a winning side? I try to hold my spot till death comes for me, Until then I hold the door open so some can be free. Cuz this door is something, people need to look at, See themselves as they dress with red or blue black gat. Fat and overweight claiming hood mind and structure, But when someone confronts em, their ego ruptures. Spills out their brains and thoughts so all can see, Then they wake up and claim it was all a dream. Hook: For this door is something for everyone to look at, Back in time to see where white people didn't act black. It's a shame to know how life is so judgemental now a days, Anyone can get signed, you just have to be a gangsta rapper today. A hallway leads to the beginning of something amazing, Describing it is nothing and it doesn't give to aging. My job isn't always easy, but the true see what is for what it is, Though inside isn't always clear for those in the biz. It is something that, I think the world needs to see, Believe in the life that God gave to us and praise his glory, A story as old as time, but not something you can say in rhymes, Or else people say "its boring me" and turn to 50 cent lines. Come down my friend, cuz I hold the door open for you, Are you afraid? Well, you have no choice so what are you gonna do? Your turn is now, look into this mirror and tell me what you see, Is it a white boy with red hair and a face full of acne? Or is it a black man with a blue bandana and a NBA hat on, You see nothing? Guess your view of the gat was wrong. Hook For this door is something for everyone to look at, Back in time to see where white people didn't act black. It's a shame to know how life is so judgemental now a days, Anyone can get signed, you just have to be a gangsta today.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me  ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-03-05, 01:54 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: FE62 2C46
I went like, 4 lines over. If you care then I will get strobe to take out the last hook.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-03-05, 02:56 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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This was feedback posted for The Revelation
IP: 3B27 2020
werd.................. nice battle, i thought someone might come with some vampire wordplay in it...... but meh, i think that Soul dropped really really weak until the last bar that really brought the whole thing to gether, but u were kinda weak until than...... i dont really like the hook in revs it should flow and rhyme alil better to be a hook but u get ur point across....... thisll be a toughy i think
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08-03-05, 03:06 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: FE62 2C46
Come on, if BC and Cham can get theirs closed in one day, how come no one is voting on mine?
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-03-05, 03:08 PM
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This was feedback posted for soul?uest
IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Check polls for fam...............................
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08-03-05, 03:12 PM
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Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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This was feedback posted for The Revelation
IP: FEFC E273
checkin polls......
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08-03-05, 08:15 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: 9B8D 2566
Still 0-0
Yawn, it's a good read too.  ...
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-04-05, 01:32 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
lol, u cant even get a vote in a day
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08-04-05, 11:31 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP: B73C FC3F
I know.
 No one loves me.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-04-05, 06:48 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: 7D72 8489
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-04-05, 07:28 PM
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New to RV
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This was feedback posted for soul?uest
IP: 251F 5C3E
checking the pollz
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