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Old 08-11-04, 01:46 PM   #16
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

wow, this was a tight battle fo real. Hot verses by both of y'all. Props to both. Let me break it down

OMB, you had a very nice verse. Hard to read by the small font, but I still managed to read it. You had some dope personals in yo verse. Better than hers, but you had like no hard hittin' punches involved in them. Perosnlas are dope, but mixed in wit good punches they are very good weapon to use in a battle. Overall, you did good in that category. Yo flow was very nice too. IT stayed tru throughout the whole verse. I think it jus went off in like one spot. But it was tight pretty much throughout the rest though. Overall, I give yo verse a 9.1/10

Fiya, you also had a dope verse. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. You had less personals, but yo punches were much better. So I think you edged out that category. Yo flow was awesome too. Yo verse looks like a square, meanin' hot flow throughout the verse. Really good job. You had a fiya verse. I give it a 9.5/10 Tight job

Props to both of y'all, but my vote goes to FIya, no hate. pc
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Old 08-11-04, 03:07 PM   #17
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vet? didn’t know you exist, just like ur type gettin’ mo’ microscopic
leveled on petri dishes, ya tryna fit like fat people on island tropics!
^^nice personal +good opener
truth you can’t dodge it, ya multis can’t replaced ur nonsensed logic
lackin’ knowledge, think u know me cuz you researched my audit?!*
^^ok..again /personal
this fraud tryna be clever, lost 2 rulers-->ya lines equal no measure!**
beat ya ass w/ pleasure, shrink font size 2 make his verse look better!
^^personal/nice
u gifted? your scrolled-lyrics are what RV uses to wipe our ass with!
ur rules: 20 lines in length, notice he couldn’t limit the fuckin’ width!
^^my favourite line in the battle,nuff said
loose structured, this dumb ass accept this battle just to get tortured!
round 2?! my avatitties tired of feedin’ you, it’s done u’re nurtured!
^^ok was'nt feelin it as much as the rest
underrated? u battle newbies-> tha best way 2 respect, recognition!
more offense-> your text is rated under any html and java scriptions!
^^decent,had ta read it twice..got lost..lol
ya can’t decently spit in time-limit if God was 2 pause every clock!
...verse stopped->ur way to come hard & fresh= ur freezer + ziplock!
^^nice..
your best lines--> empty ONEs not even your ‘fans’ would stand in!
this MAN dial-up to broadBAND, 2 get his rhymes off ‘demandin’!***
^^nice...
wanderin’ all over the board FINALLY by HardWood you got fostered!
they made you feel at home, but actually lost your name in the roster!
^^good closer...pretty funny

nice verse.."width"ahh fuck LMAO...lots of personals n original punches..nicely structured a few lines that were jus ok but still good...

OMB.....................................
im not gonna paste n copy but i will still go bar by bar..
1,good opener ...ok personal..not hittin really hard though
2,nice,good personal,this hit well....
3,ok..1st line was koo,2nd was aight..could've been written betta 4 da punch though....
4,ok,was weak compared ta ya others though/facial hair..lol
5,ok..was'nt feelin it..even with the picture(weakest line)
6,i liked this.."mafia phones"..good punch...
7,seemed like a filler line a bit...but ok punch..
8,ok,was'nt feelin that line very much,maybe its jus me....
9,nice first line,second was'nt as good but overall nice punch,
10,nice closer funny shit....
aight i got every last one of those lines n you had some pretty koo shit in there,sometimes it seems like you use mad fillers ta get you point across though..i don't like that 2 much..more wordplay was needed in punches.....but nice verse omb......
OVERALL......WOW...props ta both....both deserve the win..
but im gonna give my vote ta fiya cause she came with an obtene amount of original punches with really good structure n alot of wordplay involved in them...omb your structure with some weaker punches was your downfall....no hate nice battle
VOTE/FIYA.................THIS WAS A KILLER CLOSE BATTLE..

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Old 08-12-04, 02:56 AM   #18
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Yo, Fiya... WTF.... yesterday i won this battle???

removin that herb vote was aight... but calamity isnt even in my crew??? im in hardwood... not Audiology... so whyd ya remove that one??
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Old 08-12-04, 04:43 PM   #19
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ok punches were like pretty equal.....so i don't know how to choose....OMB had a lot of good multies....ok structure.....nice wordplay and mettas.....good vocab....over all a very close battle

LF.....you had equal punches to him....he had better multies.....you had better wordplay and structure....he had better mettas and vocab....so since the punches were equal....he takes this by multies, mettas, and vocab

v/ OMB

Very VERY close battle....i'd like to see a rematch
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Old 08-12-04, 04:49 PM   #20
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Old 08-12-04, 04:52 PM   #21
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

damn this was a close and tite battle
all of you were good and were dope
One man: your verse was sick nice drop ya structure was ok and same with ya flow but your personals were very good liked all of them, ya punches were sick too
Fiya: you a good femcee nice shit nice drop and verse ya structure was very very good and same with ya flow all good punches and personals
V/one man band for better verse overall

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