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Old 08-17-04, 08:06 PM   #16
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Voted For: Paramik

Paramik Took This In My Eyes...

Just A Better Punch and WordPlay..

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Old 08-17-04, 09:40 PM   #17
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Old 08-18-04, 03:56 AM   #18
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ok there isnt much to say in a punchline battle but vote to dubz cuz his was a better punch. paramik, urs was kinda repetitive wit the "L"'s and shit and the line is kinda streched. paramik had the better vocab tho. e-dubz the punch was coo but the way u used the personal could have been done better. u know this isnt a hate paramik lol -1-

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Old 08-18-04, 12:58 PM   #19
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Old 08-19-04, 11:11 PM   #20
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Old 08-20-04, 04:00 PM   #21
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Old 08-20-04, 05:40 PM   #22
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Upping for honest votes please don't DR
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Old 08-21-04, 12:06 AM   #23
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Old 08-21-04, 01:42 PM   #24
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this was aight...e-dbuz i wasnt too much feelin, and it didnt make since, creative and punch, but the way you worded it was poor

paramik had a nice bar also...it couldve been better, but it was a harder punch, and made more since...good flow

overall-keep practicing and, good flow, but try to be more creatvie and use bigger words(enhance your vocab)

i drop all HONEST votes, even if i get voted against...good flow...no hate e-dubz on your flow either dubz

drop votes to the below links...
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Old 08-21-04, 04:21 PM   #25
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wow...both played as fuck, but the "ill" shit is super played
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Old 08-21-04, 10:34 PM   #26
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I would vote if i could, but i can't because of my limited posts, one question though, why in the fuck do people judge flow in a damn punchline battle, i thought that you were supposed to judge the punch?
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Old 08-22-04, 07:24 PM   #27
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one bar?... not too much feed back but e got this for better word play
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