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08-17-04, 08:06 PM | #16 | ||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
Voted For: Paramik
Paramik Took This In My Eyes... Just A Better Punch and WordPlay.. Vote - Paramik ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-17-04, 09:40 PM | #17 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin..
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08-18-04, 03:56 AM | #18 | ||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: e-dubz
ok there isnt much to say in a punchline battle but vote to dubz cuz his was a better punch. paramik, urs was kinda repetitive wit the "L"'s and shit and the line is kinda streched. paramik had the better vocab tho. e-dubz the punch was coo but the way u used the personal could have been done better. u know this isnt a hate paramik lol -1- v//e-dubz
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08-18-04, 12:58 PM | #19 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin..
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08-19-04, 11:11 PM | #20 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
up..
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08-20-04, 04:00 PM | #21 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin..
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08-20-04, 05:40 PM | #22 | ||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: C3C9 A5E9
Upping for honest votes please don't DR
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08-21-04, 12:06 AM | #23 | |||||
THE COUNCIL
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This was feedback posted for e-dubz
IP: 6D9E 466F
check'n this out.
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08-21-04, 01:42 PM | #24 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E723 2459
Voted For: Paramik
this was aight...e-dbuz i wasnt too much feelin, and it didnt make since, creative and punch, but the way you worded it was poor paramik had a nice bar also...it couldve been better, but it was a harder punch, and made more since...good flow overall-keep practicing and, good flow, but try to be more creatvie and use bigger words(enhance your vocab) i drop all HONEST votes, even if i get voted against...good flow...no hate e-dubz on your flow either dubz drop votes to the below links... |
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08-21-04, 04:21 PM | #25 | ||||
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IP: F98A 46E1
Voted For: e-dubz
wow...both played as fuck, but the "ill" shit is super played v/edubz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-21-04, 10:34 PM | #26 | ||||
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
I would vote if i could, but i can't because of my limited posts, one question though, why in the fuck do people judge flow in a damn punchline battle, i thought that you were supposed to judge the punch?
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08-22-04, 07:24 PM | #27 | |||
Back In Business
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
Voted For: e-dubz
one bar?... not too much feed back but e got this for better word play |
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