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Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:17 AM.

past perfect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:18 AM.

brains on the ground punctured liver all flailing
ya punchlines hit air like the flag on a boat when it's sailing
u couldn't even get this win with a rebate mail in
so i'll come down on ya ass like a hammer when it's nailing
and u can cry while i'm ripping u but i ain't caring
i knew u was a cross dresser u sure ya name ain't karen
i'll leave u dumped on ya ass with ya hemroids flaring
nigga i'll let the glock rip u up
while u letting boy george stick u in the butt
so i'm in ya cut like an infectous disease
and i'm leave u hanging like a slave by ya neck from the tree
and i'm so hot for u to battle me their's a text message fee
nigga i'm gonna chop ya leg off and swing them around like propellers
then shove a pole up ya ass and have ya head open like an umbrella
nigga i'll rockafella
and u happen to be one
u couldn't win against me if u had a refund
so nigga pack ya bags up quick and leave town
and i ain't ice man but i'm about freeze u down
i wouldn't be suprised if u didn't respond cause for me this was an easy round

this liar is prone to cheat in battle, but my fire is known
& everyone's senior shit like you live in a retirement home..
i'll fuck your mother then thank her, thats truth queef
my punches leave your expression blanker than loose-leaf
he can't get a taste of niceness, this phony stalks fame
i'll leave him further underground then the tony hawk game..
but ya not one of the best, not admired & dude
like needing 'sleep after sex', im 'fucking tired' of you
click shit, get hit bitch, put shots by yo dome
& rip this fag into pieces like hes made of styrofoam
ur style: wack multies, simple punches - im abusing it b
but yeah, your verses are worthy .. of losing to me
im choosing the steez that you'll up & follow for years
my verse is in ur stomach .. cuz i told u swallow ur fears
ur the hollowest queer, shit aint possessin a substance
im like abusive fathers.. teach U a lesson in public ..
no time on the mic, for rappin or hosting events
aint u that dude feeble minded aint bother posting against?
we could be closest of friends, but give ur mouth a quota
cuz u rushmore lines than the mountain in south dakota..

Voted For: past perfect

past perfect won this battle in my opinion he had betta flow betta multis batta punches betta personals all around betta this was a nice verse i enjoyed readin it tha flash had a nice verse but it wasnt good enough nice battle

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Voted For: past perfect

u win for better structure and for havin perfect inyour name

return the vote for my battle vs. emergingmc..... or fag

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Voted For: past perfect

pass perfect




this liar is prone to cheat in battle, but my fire is known
& everyone's senior shit like you live in a retirement home..
^like i gave in the punchline thread,4/10
i'll fuck your mother then thank her, thats truth queef
my punches leave your expression blanker than loose-leaf
^clever like that one
he can't get a taste of niceness, this phony stalks fame
i'll leave him further underground then the tony hawk game..
^average punch

but ya not one of the best, not admired & dude
like needing 'sleep after sex', im 'fucking tired' of you
^nice play on words
click shit, get hit bitch, put shots by yo dome
& rip this fag into pieces like hes made of styrofoam
^weak
ur style: wack multies, simple punches - im abusing it b
but yeah, your verses are worthy .. of losing to me
^ok
im choosing the steez that you'll up & follow for years
my verse is in ur stomach .. cuz i told u swallow ur fears
^oh man tight sh*t
ur the hollowest queer, shit aint possessin a substance
im like abusive fathers.. teach U a lesson in public ..
^not all that
no time on the mic, for rappin or hosting events
aint u that dude feeble minded aint bother posting against?
^nall I think that might be me.
we could be closest of friends, but give ur mouth a quota
cuz u rushmore lines than the mountain in south dakota..
^topped off nicely

Flash

brains on the ground punctured liver all flailing
ya punchlines hit air like the flag on a boat when it's sailing
^nope not a good comparison.
u couldn't even get this win with a rebate mail in
so i'll come down on ya ass like a hammer when it's nailing
^nope again these two had potential cause the punch was there but creativity wasn't see what I mean?
and u can cry while i'm ripping u but i ain't caring
i knew u was a cross dresser u sure ya name ain't karen
^decent
i'll leave u dumped on ya ass with ya hemroids flaring
nigga i'll let the glock rip u up
while u letting boy george stick u in the butt
^switched the flow up but I caught it so it's all good.
so i'm in ya cut like an infectous disease
and i'm leave u hanging like a slave by ya neck from the tree
and i'm so hot for u to battle me their's a text message fee
^should've replaced 'leave' with a more creative word in both lines to add to the effect.

nigga i'm gonna chop ya leg off and swing them around like propellers
then shove a pole up ya ass and have ya head open like an umbrella
^decent lines here graphic sh^t
nigga i'll rockafella
and u happen to be one
u couldn't win against me if u had a refund
^weakness
so nigga pack ya bags up quick and leave town
and i ain't ice man but i'm about freeze u down
^oh no you fallin off what's happening?
i wouldn't be suprised if u didn't respond cause for me this was an easy round
^don't get the hopes up too soon sunny.

flash had some nice flow,but lack creativeness. Didn't have good punches.

pass was real nice with the metas and similes. Flow was on so was the punches occasionally.


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Voted For: past perfect

ok flash good structure and ok disses and punches vocab was decent 4/10
past good ass opener and ender dope punches good vocab and structure hot verse good ass wordplay 8.5/10
i never seen this guy past before but he had a dope verse here good shit no hate but he got you flash

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Voted For: Tha Flash

felt this more den tha utha cat but big up`z ta both y'all peep my battle an vote honestly even if itz against me