Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 07:51 AM

Must drop verse in 1000000000 minutes after check in.

check monn>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 07:22 AM.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 07:26 AM.

if u looking for an easy battle u stumbled to the wrong corner
cause the heater throw slugz harder then kurt warner
i gotta enough wins so i can battle in the elevated "front-lines"
ya wack dog u need to go home and practice so u can elevate ya "punch-lines"
cause the heater hit, spilt, rip, knock ya head "outta-place"
lyrics have the minister at funeral rapping seminars like they came "outta-mase"
strap the heater to my waist, tighten up my "shoe-lace"
45. leave ya ass looking like "two-face"
u claim to be hard trying to "bust-some-rhymes"
have ya head leaking on the floor when i "bust-the-nine"
you'll know when i'm coming cause i carry the ox
when the slugz hit ya you'll fold up like a cardboard box
the next clip of slugz hit ya knock u outta ya socks
lyrics hit u in ya head like martin luther king with the rock
the mac 10 put holes in ya ride like they did with "tu-pac"
rhino tips hit ya body leave ya dead after "two-shots"
the red beams wrap around ya shoulders like "tube-tops"
lyrics leave ya temper boiling like hot grease left in "used-pots"
have ya ankles breaking make u fall out ya "tube-socks"
ya talk real greasy but nigga look... now "who's-hot"
blow up ya stomach with a deadly combination of booze and "pop-rocks"
u may think ya good but in this battle ya losing ya "top-spot"
the desert eagle transform ya ass like the autobots and "hot-shot"
u claim to be one of the best but ya "not-hot"
punch ya ass like the keys on my "lap-top"
nigga u softer then linen cloths
i'll rip ya soul out and use ya spirit to floss
u want my lyrics bad so ya asking what's the cost
knock ya head off ya shoulders like the headless "horse-man"
u couldn't get in a crew even if u were a navy "corps-man"


1.)"lyrics have the minister at funeral rapping seminars like they came "outta-mase" (MASE WAS A MINISTER BEFORE HE CAME BACK)
2.)"45. leave ya ass looking like "two-face" (THE VILLAN OFF OF THE BATMAN CARTOON'S AND MOVIES)
3.)"you'll know when i'm coming cause i carry the ox (A GUN)
4.)"the desert eagle transform ya ass like the autobots and "hot-shot" (THE AUTOBOTS AND HOT SHOT ARE FROM THE CARTOON TRANSFORMERS ARMADA)

yo yo yo gay boy rap his shit on da gay show//
i feel sry 4 his ma the poor basterd needs some dow//(money)
luda luda on the myk this gay bitch need to take a hyk//
im spilting my shit it hitting him bad lyk//
hes now slipt hes wack stuff its hitting me weak//
hes got a good record 4 now until i finshed with him hell be weak//
lyk dey say i ave al da style n class i just kickd his nigga ASS//
gay boy gay boy on da myk raping hes shit hitting me weak coz i got class//
i slap him silly with my rap hes got a sence of crap//
i bet he bites every rhyme coz hes thinks its cool comiting crime//
i am da winner winner hes da loser loser crying his head off//
hes seen da light of da loses i kicked his nigga ass hes seen a gay moth//
he calls himself the livinlegend it sud be living legnd of the gays/losers//
batty basterd losed this easy livinlegend got defeat amug i am da crusers//

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uppin

uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>4>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>votes
man u didnt need that many lines

stop complaining, it was unlimted bars, uppin

uppin

Voted For: Livin Legend

Livin Legend
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

*+*ludacris*+*
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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7 Day Theory

u seriously suck no hate but its true and i heard you got banned shame but ur verse wasnt good... the ohter guy was dope livin legend...

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Voted For: Livin Legend

this battle goes to livin legend, better hits,
hey luda im calling you out cuz

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