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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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Eyvon vs Ms.Skillz4daze
IP: A190 A400
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ILL SHIT ON U!!! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-05-04 at 06:34 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: A190 A400
Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 06:37 PM.
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IP: 80E9 05F4
Ms.Skillz4daze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 06:55 PM.
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Flyweight
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IP: 80E9 05F4
Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/ You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/ I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? / Artistry is a passion of mine. You wrote a female version of Emimem's song..How pure is that?/For sure you're wack/ And then you wanna get mad because you lack/ 'da skills to test Ms.Skillz, I ain't new to rap/ Perhaps you wanted some mindless minions I gave my honest opinions. Maybe you ain't used to that/ You threw a temper tantrum, ranted on like Rapverse phantom. You ain't no femcee, YOU'S A BRAT!/ *smackin' Evyon* Little girl, gimme back my microphone/ Spittin' ya sorry verses like an incompotent witch sends boomerang curses Again, LEAVE 'DA MIC ALONE!/Now while you wilin' KEEP IN MIND THAT I AM FREESTYLING. During our battles, you be writin' while I KEYSTYLE/ Trust me, if I took even a few SECONDS to write, you would be trying to cop a plea, Child/ I'm still just warmin' up but you don't really want to battle cuz THEN IT'S GONNA BE FOUL |
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/ A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/ You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/ My rhyming skills got you climbing hills/ I travel through your mind until you spine like siren drills/ I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants/ With some ex rappers till their spinal column disconnects/ We disinfect then check the monologue, turn your system up/ Twist them up, and indulge in the marijuana smoke/ This is the season for noise pollution contamination/ Examination of more cartoons than animation/ My lamination of narration/ Hit's a snare and bass of track fucked up rapper interrogation/ When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing/ I turn the stage into a barren wasteland.../ I'm Infinite, yo cant stop me |
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
uppin for votes yall!
just admit, i murdered this whore!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ![]() ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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Flyweight
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IP: 80E9 05F4
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You murdered that whore? So you refer to yourself as a whore?/ You slaughtered yourself by even TRYING to battle and roar but after your first thread you lost yo head and saddled for more more/ Talkin' bout you murdered that whore. You sure did cuz suicide is what you twice committed/ You killed yourself the first time which by the way was the WORST rhyme but for some reason you ain't woman enough to admit it/ Oh that's right you ain't no woman, you just a little wanna be emcee with computer access/ Your rhymes are dispicable I'm sick a you. I could VOMIT off ya wackness/ But dig this, again, while you take all of 3 days to write revenge for me I'll/ Keep doin' what I'm doin' now, lyrically SLAUGHTERIN' you wit' my keystyles/ That's just to show you wutz 'da deal Your name ain't evyon it's ENVYIN', look how you wish you had these skillz/ I'm Ms.Skillz 4 daze/ quick to amaze and leave ya in a daze/ You can't see me yet others can't understand ya lyrics cuz you in a haze/ You a wanna be internet gangsta-chick/ Girl, you ain't even got no gangsta-wit You wanna be a female 50 cents plus Eminem :GAL go somewhere wit' da WANGSTA sh*t/ My intelligence quotient is a number you probably couldn't count 'Da crowd sticks to me like Super Glue, don't hate cuz you can't even mount/ You can't even amount/ To a hill of pennies with your ridiculous flow/ Your hatin' got'cha diabolical, I'm mad methodical and meticulous yo I'm still keystylin' and makin' ya wonder how I do this/ My intelligence quotient makes me even more potent.. YOU just clueless
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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This was feedback posted for Ms.Skillz4daze
IP: 5671 DBDD
eyvon dope verse good wordplay and punches and nice flow and structure but it lacked disses still a 6/10
skill good opener dope cuz i just voted in the last battle good wordplay and flow also structure is a little streched though i aint like the ender but the rest was dope here if you had ended as strong as you started you wouldve won but you didnt and i really think this is a tie so i cant vote 6/10
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
uppin for votes. i need a win yall... i aint doin so hot...
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BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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NOK
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This was feedback posted for Eyvon
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
are u in infiniteeyvon and if uare u mad inactive have u eva been in our crew forum
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
yes im in infinite, and yeas im active, i just can never git on cause i aint got a comp @ home. ill b on again on sat @ 12:30 though
vote 4 me
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BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
uppin yall! vote me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ![]() ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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DA Dictionary
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: Eyvon
Eyvon got diss better structure better flow had sum nice punches n good use of vocab overall good verse Ms.Skillz fix ur structure it kinda fucked ur flow use more wordplay n metas to help punches but u had a nice verse 2 good battle vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze
Ms.Skillz4daze -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in stretch'd~out.. Evyon -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Beantown's Finest
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IP: 81CE 2F6B
Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze
all n all...dis battle needs work...only bout 3/4s' of it was an actual BATTLE...breakdownnnnn.... Punches - Mr Skillz...only because he actually HAD a few in that strechted ass verse...Eyvon had more of an open mic verse...he wasnt dissin nobody...das da point of a BATTLE..feel me ? Personals - Mr Skillz...i think he had like 2 decent hitters in there...like i sed b4...Eyvon had more of an open mic verse...personals are a big part in a BATTLE...use dem joints if u know how lol Meta4s - blahh tie...both verses were str8 forward...no serious metas that made me say OH SHYT lol... Wordplay - blahh...i'll give it to Enyvon because his multis made his verse wut it was...Mr skillz had most of his shyt stretched out...like u was jus typin just to make it seem more complex... Enjoyment - blahh...tie..4 the fact that Eyvon's verse had sum decent multis n good vocab...but it wasnt a battle verse...n mr skillz actually had punches so all n all it tied the enjoyment factor...buttttt... imma have to give it to Mr Skillz cuz his shyt was an actual Battle verse wit sum punches in it...u need them in a BATTLE...das da whole point...feel me...iigh Vote - oh shyt its MS skillz...lol my bad...MS.Skillz4Daze drop an honest vote no da battle in my sig iigh ~1~
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