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09-14-04, 02:44 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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Vango vs E Looch
IP: 8202 B28B
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting SPECIALLY U  No Buddy Votes aim or pms Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 09-14-04 at 03:14 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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09-14-04, 02:45 PM
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#2
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IP: 8202 B28B
E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 02:45 PM.
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09-14-04, 02:55 PM
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#3
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IP: AA51 3382
Vango has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 02:55 PM.
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09-14-04, 08:36 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: 74CA 8A59
forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids
now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan* callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game** not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name*** no need for efort with u bitch bitin names an shit why u think i said specially u fuckin herb *painter van gogh where he got his name **won,now and his name was game tite,and i put tite game....get it? ***his name was like this...VanGo and now its Vango..... get it? IF U DONT UNDERSTAND ANYTHING ELSE PLEASE DONT FUCKIN VOTE UNTILL U KNOW WHAT IS GOIN ON OWNED |
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09-15-04, 12:23 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run
Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY" So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss |
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09-15-04, 03:46 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Voted For: E Looch
Damn, this one was pretty much one-sided the whole way through. Vango, your punches didn't hit very hard, and you came with a weak closer. Also, you got quite hung up on personals, and that was your downfall. In my opinion you could've put more effort in to your drop. No hate though, keep doin' ya thing. Looch, sick drop all the way man, I understood it all this time lol. Ya wordplay was on point and your punches came pretty hard as well. I was feelin' that "fan" metaphor, about his punches "brezzin'" by, that was the highlight of your verse for me. Good shit. Vote - E Looch Return the favor with an honest explained vote, the link's in my sig...
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09-15-04, 04:43 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
p dizzle, battles are about punches and personals incase you didnt get the memo. hung up on personals huh, doesnt make much sense, oh well next vote.
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09-15-04, 04:52 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
^What I meant was you didn't focus too much on ya punches, sorry if that was unclear to you bro...
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09-15-04, 05:59 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: 8A1D B942
my list of people i beat contain people that beat u so that was lame
and a randy moss punch LMAO come on kid u got owned as predicted uppin
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09-15-04, 06:06 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9275 0703
Voted For: E Looch
haha dope battle both were good but it looks like vango didnt try his hardest in this battle but elooch did good vango: nice verse nice drop overall you owned elooch in structure and ya flow was ok ya punhces didnt hit as hard as E and ya personals are ok bbut not your best verse E: you had the upper hand with better punches that had hit hard and ya peronals were allso good ya verse was good and with wasnt as plian as vangos though vagos was iight Vote is Elooch
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09-15-04, 06:10 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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This was feedback posted for E Looch
IP: 19F7 7629
nice battle guys.....since I can't vote I was just trying to peep the progress
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09-15-04, 06:14 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 82C1 61FE
Voted For: Vango
Vango... It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's Like my name....but I dont understand the 1's Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow Dollars...swallow? RV money? weak... Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY" pretty plain personal...an he doesnt battle nobody's So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy lmao...froggish leap line Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss Bad wordplay and metiphore. ur not good sorry forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids Lil stretched. decent wordplay u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian killa flo...an vocab, in right context also sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan* callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan nah...wak filla holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin nope...wak as well if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game** not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name*** Nice closer. Hard personals. an wordplay Bad battle. Voted E Looch. 2 good lines to none. Switched |
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09-15-04, 06:16 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 82C1 61FE
Voted for right person.
Posted Under wrong name. Goin to get it fixed right now. Sorry. |
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09-15-04, 06:37 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
sure carson seems like he would be a fair vote...........
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09-15-04, 06:48 PM
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#15
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 7B25 12F1
Voted For: E Looch
It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's ^^aight,ok opener6/10 Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow ^^wasnt feelin it,5/10 Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY" ^^nice,7.5/10 So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy ^^lol..7.5/10 Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss kinda weak closer,6.5/10 overall ok verse,was'nt all hard hiting punches but it was decent 32.5/50 forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids ^^nice opener,8/10 u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian ^^decent,7/10 sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan* callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan ^^ok,7/10 holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin ^^ok,6.5/10 if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game** not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name*** ^^nice 9/10 overall 35.5/50 both were nice verses,props ta both,but looch had more content in his verse n originality with punches was deffinately evident,i got all the personals n punches but the best was looch's closer,nicely worded n delivered well,vango,most of your punches were played concepts..both had good flow n good structure nice battle........... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149439
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