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09-18-04, 01:28 PM | #16 | ||||
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IP: A063 529A
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hahahaha........ he means... my endings fool....... which is MINES all u gotta do is ask anyone i've been saying it..... BANG-BANG-EARLY YA HERD!!! upp'in for more votes..... |
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09-18-04, 03:05 PM | #17 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 0809 3AD6
How you can say fool after this is beyond me.
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09-19-04, 10:12 AM | #18 | ||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 511D E1B4
Voted For: intensify effect
Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs- I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs ^^ok opener,played concept though...7/10 Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's ^^7/10...good personal but worded wierd"uncoordinated"? I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture.. Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster ^^ehh,ok..6/10..diss your opponent So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0... Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow ^^ok personal..6.5/10 Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik.... ^^weak closer,but flowed well...6/10 overall 32.5/50....personal were ok but your originality n creativity with ya punches lacked some,flow was good though.. u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence ^^ok name play,played concept..7.5/10 i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS ^^was'nt feelin it much,6/10 im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle *ha * (its better if we hear noting) ^^good line,nice personal,8/10 carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout ^^ok...6/10 my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision u wanna "blast-for-me? (blasphemy) not befor i Change u'r religion BITCH!!! BANG-BANG-EARLY.... ^^ok closer 6/10 overall 33.5/50,ok verse personals were decent,more originality with punches,flow was there,good word/nameplay. aight this was close but from punches carson you jus lacked a lil,structure n flow were fine but nothin you used as a punch was'nt played,meta's on both verses were weak,ie,again some of your punches were based on played concepts,flow was there n all,your closer had decnt wordplay but was a weak closer....overall i gave my vote to ie for slightly more creative n harder hitting punches....
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09-19-04, 11:49 AM | #19 | |||
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IP: A063 529A
ok lets get a few more votes in this................
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09-19-04, 01:48 PM | #20 | |||||||
the medicine man
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This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
IP: 888C 2BD4
good battle. wen i com bak ill vote
ill up it 4 u though |
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09-19-04, 03:21 PM | #21 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 0809 3AD6
uppin this.
I can't believe you got two votes taken away.... I mean....WOW....I killed you lil boy..... If you win this.....BY poll's....There's summin wrong wit the system. -1 |
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09-19-04, 03:22 PM | #22 | |||
Klassic
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
Voted For: intensify effect
i think that carson took it, he had positively better stracture and flow, the word selection was also quite over intensify's. vote honest on my battle PEACE. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-19-04, 03:23 PM | #23 | |||
Klassic
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
sorry wrong name i ment intensify ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^6
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09-19-04, 03:27 PM | #24 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: B85B 4636
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
ok this is kinda close but carson gots 10/10 on punches and a 10/10 on his structure and he has 10/10 on his rhyming so he got a perfect on dis 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-19-04, 04:17 PM | #25 | |||
Banned
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IP: A063 529A
haha, on the jock a little to much u think he got a perfect 10.....
haha thats crazy.... |
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09-19-04, 05:01 PM | #26 | |||||||
My Skills>Your Skills
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
i.e.- na. punches were poo and im tired of u tryin to convince people that the line was hot by typing *ha* and *lol* after ya shit...stop it! structure=off wordplay=nah metas=weak....keep elevatin.....3/10 carson- so youve merged back in to text huh? anywayz your punches were hard as fuck, i reallllly liked that one bout the tits....lmao! personals were on point everything was just good this time around...8/10 nobody get this shit takin off, this is plenty of feedback. i summarized and gave tips. rtf....
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09-19-04, 05:37 PM | #27 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
IP: 5043 32F4
lol both of you are wack and intensify won but lol wack
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09-19-04, 06:46 PM | #28 | ||||
da da doo
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IP: 896E D654
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
Carson: Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs- I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs nice personal and it is true 7/10 Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's personal again and connected 6/10 I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture.. Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster nice again 7/10 So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0... Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow played personal/punch 5/10 Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik.... nice line and complex 7/10 intensify: u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence it was okay but einstein lines are played as fuck 6.5/10 i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS another played line again 5.5/10 im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle weak this was played aswell 5/10 carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout ass line 3/10 my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision u wanna "blast-for-me? not befor i Change u'r religion another played one wtf 2/10 vote: carson check averages
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09-19-04, 08:35 PM | #29 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 0809 3AD6
See waht happens when vet's vote...
Hmm... Uppin. even tho it's 5-1 when Strobe fixes shit. Let's close it before that. LOL. |
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09-21-04, 09:21 PM | #30 | |||
Banned
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IP: A063 529A
upp'in this battle
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