Voted For: XxXtayve

Aiight.. Both verses could use some work, but I think Yvonne took the battle for sure. She had better punches and the flow was definatly better. Intensity, you gotta work on making your rhymes flow better cuz I couldnt really pick it up at all on the verse.

- Vote: Yvonne

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Voted For: intensify effect

Imma Have To Give This To I.E......

Yvonne: Ok, First Of All Ya structure Was A Lil poor...I Couldn't Really Tell Where Ya Lines End Or Begin. Also I Feel That Ya Punches Wern't As Creative As I.E. For Example Ya 6th Bar Was kinda Childlike... lol sorry.... Try to Improve Ya Wordplay and Metas.....

I.E: Structure Was Ok, Some Lines Were Stretched. You Had Some Nice Wordplay In This. Ya Opener Was Set Up Well But I Feel That The Second Line Was Kinda Weak.....The Four-Kast Joint And The 50 Cent Thing lol. Nice Wordplay. Overall I Think Ya Had More Creative Punches, With Some Nice Wordplay.

Vote: I.E......

upp'in............................................ .......

my gat will split u stiff into four-kast like a weather prediction
come on now i even impress my-self with that line,
N i started with a weak bar....

upp'in for votes

upp'in............................................ ........

Voted For: XxXtayve

this was a weak battle but i have to say yvonee got it.......

i.e.-aight u had an okay verse.......saw some multis.............your structure was insanely horrid........seriously......that needs some work.......you had okay punches.....ya personal was kinda weak....good attempt tho.......ya flow was good.....try puttin some more complex vocab in there............good job tho no hate

yvonne-aight you came harder with the personals in this battle.........your structure was better if you look at where u lines eneded compared to his............you had stretched lines tho i didnt like that too much but it was good........your punches were good........your flow was better........had a lot of multi's..........coulda had better vocab in this tho......good verse

v/yvonne

reutrn the favor
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danm i dont understand why i cant vote on any of these battles???
but since i cant vote i'll make it simple, I.E won cuz her verse had me ready to pass out N fall out in cloud 12 fuck that shit was weak I.E u'r verse was weak as fuck i mean ya both aint do much of anything but if anything i.e did slightly more damage in hes verse then her

Voted For: intensify effect

ehh wack battle...yvonne you were really wack that whole style was basic and elementary... your punches were basic your flow was basic your structure was basic... your metas were dope lol... basically it basic

overall :4.1/10

I.E:

basically your verse was basic also... ok enough with the basic's ... first bar was wack ... would have been better off without it... but your 2nd and 3rd bars were pretty good so you get my vote

overall : 6.8/10

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Voted For: XxXtayve

You're Both Garbage And Should Never Spit Again...
But Since I Gotta Vote Yv Took This...
Intesity...Wow, You Sucked Roooooooyally...
I Didnt See ANYTHING Work Reading In Your Verse...
And Most Of Your Actual Rhyming Was Awkward And Weak Aswell...
So Since You Both Suck Ill Vote Based On Flow...
And Yv Had Atleast That So She Got This...
.One.

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uppin this old battle..

Yv took this.............

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