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10-01-04, 08:53 PM
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onetimekilla vs ProVerse
IP: 0825 899A
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6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting due tommorow cuz i'm gettin some shit recorded Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-04-04 at 08:53 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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10-01-04, 09:03 PM
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#2
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IP: 0825 899A
ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:03 PM.
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10-01-04, 09:04 PM
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#3
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IP: 9766 7F4F
onetimekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:04 PM.
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10-01-04, 09:16 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Pro prepares to murk.... OTK cuts and paste lyrics but doesn't OwnTheKnife your lyrics aren't worth shit,yo punchlines owe a price multiple time filler but a onetime killer but a 3 time felon you killed your own verse using dead wordplay as a weapon your put me to sleep and bore me so you should be ARESTed you brag about one endever you just stretchin aggresion you could delete my post and a YOULOSE messege is still espected your 3rd strike might be your answer to my 2nd reply a clock will have to blow in your face for you to get WINS one time(wins) Pro's finished the merk....peace
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10-01-04, 09:19 PM
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#5
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New to RV
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IP: 9766 7F4F
You wanna delay time cause you aint shit,
So ima go to your house and lick on ya girls clit. I'm somebody with who you dont wanna spit, Cause you know you will get your fuckin throat slit. You wanna mess with me I'm the best, Hollows I load penetrate through your bullet proof vest. You crazy puttin me to the test, You the type that gets caught for lovin your sister, they call that incest. You are startin to sweat from your sweat glands, Cause you realize that I could beat you typin with less than two hands. I be the one destroyin your plans, Beatin you over the head with some motherfuckin cookin pans. When the shells drop you wonder why your chest is burnin, I spit the hottest, you need to be learnin, This is free, I aint here to be earnin, After hearin a white man flow, the color of your skin you wanna be turnin, be the color white. Because when I type, i give you some fright. So before I send you on this dead end flight, The last thing I say is good night. |
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10-03-04, 04:25 PM
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#6
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IP: 3240 794D
B.L.A. prepares to murk....
OTK cuts and paste lyrics but doesn't OwnTheKnife your lyrics aren't worth shit,yo punchlines owe a price multiple time filler but a onetime killer but a 3 time felon you killed your own verse using dead wordplay as a weapon your put me to sleep and bore me so you should be ARESTed you brag about one endever you just stretchin aggresion you could delete my post and a YOULOSE messege is still espected your 3rd strike might be your answer to my 2nd reply a clock will have to blow in your face for you to get WINS one time(wins) B.L.A.'s finished the merk....peace |
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10-03-04, 04:27 PM
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#7
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IP: 3240 794D
I recently changed my name so....
Of cource i had to post again cuz i couldn't even see your verse
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10-03-04, 04:46 PM
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#8
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: ProVerse
flow-B.L.A, much more together, one times lines some were stretched and some were too short, bla got this aspect easy punches/personals-b.l.a, much more creative personals and a lot harder hitting onetime you gotta work at this, your punches are playeddd, and didnt hit, they felt like a normal 50 cent verse..., actually i think 50 sucks more then that but thats beyond the point, u kno what im sayin they were played and deliver personals instead of makin so many threats, no hate though, you tried creativity-b.l.a like said above much more creative punches no hate on nobody pretty much one sided battle good luck to both peace
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10-03-04, 06:07 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanks for the votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin
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10-03-04, 07:18 PM
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#10
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: ProVerse
i think bla won dis for his betta structure and flow. he also had more and better personal punches v/bla |
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10-03-04, 07:24 PM
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#11
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin for votes
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10-03-04, 07:25 PM
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#12
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP: CC30 7562
Voted For: ProVerse
B.L.A. took this no doubt ONETIMEKILLA Weak Shit Opener-BLA Closer-BLA Multis-BLA Vocab-BLA Wordplay-BLA Punches-BLA Personals-BLA Metas-BLA Flow-BLA Structure-BlA Overall Fav Lines- B.L.A="OTK cuts and paste lyrics but doesn't OwnTheKnife your lyrics aren't worth shit,yo punchlines owe a price" onetimekilla-"NONE" Return The Favor Ta The Link To The Battle In My Profile ~1~ |
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10-03-04, 07:32 PM
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#13
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My Dick Stay Wet
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This was feedback posted for ProVerse
IP: 3240 794D
just want to see da polls since u in my crew dog...good spit tho 4-real my nigga..
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10-03-04, 07:34 PM
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#14
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-BTR-
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: ProVerse
ha ha. this was a lop-sided win. that "killa" kid aint have 1 real punch in his whole verse. all his attempted punches were played, his structure and flow was messed up. b.l.a verse was good. he had everything punches, flow. its obvious vote for b.l.a |
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10-04-04, 03:17 AM
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a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: ProVerse
Opener - Proverse, the other guy dissed himself.. proverse, was a nice punch too.. Flow - pro verse, better transitions.. punches - pro verse, time killa barley had any.. structure - pro verse, more st8 lines, way more paralell.. wordplay - pro verse', it just sounded better when said.. closer - pro verse.. a more clever ending.. Basically proverse took it in every category,.. nice job from both, but BLA gets this, wun.. return honest vote right here cuz,THANX. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152757
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