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10-17-04, 02:20 AM
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This was feedback posted for shadow
IP: C38B B51C
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
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10-17-04, 02:40 AM
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Ya Skills Are Just Myth
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IP: 666C F77E
Voted For: Daz
Shadow: I expected u to come better than this, the opener was aight, it involved an ok personal in it but most of ya verse seem played such as the jackson line and the titty line, the strobe line was ok, structure was on point, flow was good but punches weren't hitting hard, not much else to say is that it could have been better, 4/10 Daz: i was feeling ya verse, structure was good except for the 2 stretched lines, flow was on more or less on point, liked the sundown and heated winter line, good meta's such as the wrong foot, good personals, punches was hitting good, all in all it was good, 8/10 vote - Daz return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate
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10-17-04, 09:19 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 7A3E F05A
Voted For: Daz
Daz: Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder.. chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over.. Nice opener, first line played well into the second one, which was damn clever, 4/5 no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown.. and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown.. Nice play off his name, punch was aight nuthin' special 3/5 Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put.. lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot.. Nice meta here, punch didn't really come but other than that it was good, 3/5 everyone knows that im better sir.. and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were.. A little self-glorifying, but you made up for it with the punch, 3.5/5 Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter.. I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members.. Nice personal here, but the "heated winter" could've been replaced with something better...say, "repenting sinner"? oh well, 3/5 Total: 16.5/25 shadow: admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster?? becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster.. Nice opener, good play off his name, ok punch, 3.5/5 been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son... cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson... Ok multi in the first line, but Jackson lines are played, 2/5 that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated.. strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted... Punch didn't hit hard, even callin' yourself wack, 1.5/5 im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty.. cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty... Punch wasn't hard, but it was ok, 2.5/5 Last 2 lines are missing so you'll get a 0/5 Total: 9.5/25 Winner: Daz with harder punches, better wordplay, and 10 lines. No hate shadow, it just looks like you didn't try at all in this battle. Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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