Battle Rules:

6 Line's
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-04 at 03:35 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed for going over 6 line limit

ReQuiem has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 03:05 PM.

Cautious has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 03:16 PM.

This Fag-Ass Kid Wanted To Call Me Out In Bitchslapped
Ima Hang Draw & Quarter This Bitch Leave His Body "Rapped"
I'll Rip Ya Rib's Open and Spew My Verb's all Over Ya Content's
Time To Repent As I Resume a Relentless Attack That u Can't Prevent
4 Line's and Ya already Feelin My Intensity & My Scorching Heat
kid Think's He's a Lyrical Butcher-Only Because He Beats His Meat
Done.Weak Verse.

if this nigga didnt know cautious just now land//the only pussy that he got on deck is his right hand// i aint got time for this nigga this bitch ass niggas on games//i make yo ass a franchise boy with white tees wit red stains//and stop usein peoples clothes cause all u doin is bumbin//ill bust a nut in yo face and u still wouldent see me cummin// so take notes from a nigga cause yo ass aint shit//u thiink u hard nigga but wait till u feel a holo tip//i know u cant swim so ill put yo body in a lake// and nowonder niggas think u sweet cause yo ass is a cake//ReQuiem talkes shit in his rapps so u know hes a lier ill make yo ass do like jay-z and make u retire//this niggas like micheal jackson he only fucks wit boys//while im upstairs wit his mama makin all dat noise//and i dont wont u to feel bad bout the rymes out my mouf//cause my bullets are like detergent bitch they make u wonna shout//andd if yo bitch ran up i just might have 2 shoot her//answer this question did u take a bath befor u hped on the computer//im tired of battlin people thats scare 2 die by the trigga// and listen to the way he cusses 2 can tell hes a wigga

U Fuckin Newby 6 Lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dq Nigga Read The Rule's Before You Spit Your Wack Verse.

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bitch u got 7 lines fuck the rules and fuck u 2 bitch mad ass nigga u soft talkin bout im weak who did u battle that yo ass beat.....yo dick

Just postin feedback...i try not to vote on noobish battles...

ReQuiem...some rhymes seemed force...overplayed concepts...and no good punches, elevate

Cautious-dont use //'s...douche....your whole verse looked like a pile of shit...elevate

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6 Lines with Rhymes u fuckin Cunt...Just quit Rap man please...

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Voted For: Cautious

*yawn*

punches- cautious cuz u had em
personals- neither
metas- cautious u had em
multis- RQ u had em
structure- RQ cuz it wuz easier to read it
word play- neither
flow- RQ just flowed better
humor- cautious

cautious work on your structure cuz it wuz hard to read your verse. also watch it cuz he said 6 lines and u can get DQed for it. overall put in personals and wordplay.

RQ all u did wuz self glorify. try punches, personals, etc... u had multis, ok to see.

No hate just an honest voter. v/cautious

pz

Fuckin hell 6 LINES MAN HES DQ

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Voted For: Cautious

DAMn nigga u got some godly ass punchlines, u won dis shit.
but u mite wanna fix up your structure cuz that was off
Punches-8/10
structure-6/10
wordplay-8/10

how bad u merked that nigga 10/10

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