Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No gayness

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-03-04 at 04:21 PM

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Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 04:21 PM.

nigga ill bring dem ak;s out never hesitant to fill u lead
i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said?
u a bitch, ull get sliced more than Italian bread
the last nigga that cracked jokes like u,ended up dead
the barrels explode leavin ya insides GRUDGED like sara michelle gellar
ill get ya BEAN rocked, but i aint talkin bout ROCKAFELLER
man u really got courage, i dont know why u went through this
take a hint we dont like ya crew neebies are useless
u could never trust me nigga, ill get u popped wit ya own gat
my record doesnt mean shit,now u know why niggas gotta fall back

for this line-i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said?
i mean <

bean=beanie siegel on rockafella records
sara michelle gellar stared in the grudge in theaters now-im advertisin lol
that dude smokajoka666 had died, get it joker=jokes

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ReQuiem has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 04:39 PM.

Yo
Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame,
Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame,
Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline
Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine
The Dude Still Gets His Dad's Cock Up His ass and Just says its Family Bonding
So Wack He leaves Suicide Letter's In OM and still Theres no one Responding
Ill have ya Vomiting Out Ya rhymes thats the Only way they Gonna be "Sick"
So Go get Raped by ya Dad,Hoe,You've Been Ripped,Go find Another Dick ta Lick.

Okay weak verse.just came off the top of my Dome..lol

yo wat da hell man u musta been think bout some gay shit to kkep talkin bout dick, anyway uppin

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Voted For: Golden shellz

golden wins dis one. dis was one of da closest battle ive seen in a little while, but i think golden shellz took it because his punches were more direct and hit harder, vote golden

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close battle wow of corse im winning over this homo u poppin mad shit requiem uppin

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Voted For: ReQuiem

Golden shellz-You got skills, you just waste em by basing your whole drop on gunplay....get original kid, it was a nice rap with a good structure n flow...but the overplayed concept killed ya

ReQuiem-structure was a little off..but it didnt effect the flow to bad..noticed one personal...gay talk is overplayed...but you didnt base your whole rhyme scheme on it like Golden with gunplay...

V/Requiem
Reason:More original

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forot to add...please return the favor on my battle against Khaos or RapGod...thanks

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What.....Golden?...Gonna get Ya D/R ta back u Up Eh?.....Uppin.....

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Voted For: ReQuiem

checkin polls peeps

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eh ill just explain it

golden-
nigga ill bring dem ak;s out never hesitant to fill u lead
i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said?
u a bitch, ull get sliced more than Italian bread
the last nigga that cracked jokes like u,ended up dead
the barrels explode leavin ya insides GRUDGED like sara michelle gellar
ill get ya BEAN rocked, but i aint talkin bout ROCKAFELLER
man u really got courage, i dont know why u went through this
take a hint we dont like ya crew neebies are useless
u could never trust me nigga, ill get u popped wit ya own gat
my record doesnt mean shit,now u know why niggas gotta fall back

^^okay good verse...you had great punches......flowed good........you had okay wordplay.....coulda been better......you used nigga in your verse more than once so it kinda made me not feel your verse as much cuz there isnt much need to put it in there at all or at most once not more than once...but w/e....you structure was kinda off try and even your lines.....saw no multi's and no metas either so that took off your verse...personals i didnt see any........work on putin some personals multis metas and get better vocab if you had better vocab it woulda been a closer battle....
overall....6/10

requiem-Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame,
Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame,
Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline
Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine
The Dude Still Gets His Dad's Cock Up His ass and Just says its Family Bonding
So Wack He leaves Suicide Letter's In OM and still Theres no one Responding
Ill have ya Vomiting Out Ya rhymes thats the Only way they Gonna be "Sick"
So Go get Raped by ya Dad,Hoe,You've Been Ripped,Go find Another Dick ta Lick.

^^okay very good verse.....you had really good punches just came out ahead of golden in this catagory......you had personals which were good....you verse flowed really nice........great vocab and worplay.......saw multi's which is good.......not really any metas your structure was good...but you def cam out ahead cuz you just overall came harder......just work on directing your personals a lil more like make them easier to understand that its a personal...(add a link) but not bad good drop man
overall 8/10
peace~1

return the favor.....links in my sig

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