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Old 12-02-04, 01:06 AM   #1
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K-9 vs Big-Scoot

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Old 12-02-04, 04:40 PM   #2
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Big-Scoot has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 04:40 PM.
 
Old 12-02-04, 05:17 PM   #3
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So u a K-9 huh, well nigga I'm tha dog catcher/
I caught this win and added a loss to ya record/
Niggaz runnin around gassed like a fuckin H-2/
But I'mma have kats shook when they see what I do to u/
Foot up a dog's ass like I'm John Witherspoon/
Leave u in ER eatin out a tube like it's a spoon/
All day "It's my Pleasure" schoolin niggaz like u/
Teach u tha basics of rhymin like first grade and 2 + 2/
A lil piece of advice don't fuck wit tha Dream Team/
Cuz we'll be outside ya house holdin 9's wit red beams/
Checkin bitches like u mo than coats at a club/
And please belive I'll lay ya bitch ass out like a rug/
Yo flow is artificial while my shit is all natural/
Chew u up and spit u out like white boys and tobacco/
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Old 12-02-04, 05:18 PM   #4
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Foot up a Dog's ass and "It's my pleasure" C-mon I know yall saw Friday
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Old 12-02-04, 09:31 PM   #5
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K-9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 09:31 PM.
 
Old 12-02-04, 09:46 PM   #6
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This nigga got a spot in his "draws" where da "shit" show...
He got it from "scootin" his "big" ass down "skid row"...
Me slauterin your rhymes prolly "pay" more than it "cost"...
Then you'll have on your "resume", "battled K-9 and lost"...
Cause, I'm "virtually" unbeatable, "seer" of the unseeable...
My verses is "holograms", can't "feel 'em", but they readable...
I keep my verses "cold", less chance for them to "spoil"...
YOur words wouldn't be "fresh" if you "rapped'em" in tin foil...
And the "loss" on my record...belongs to your "girly"...
The only reason she out "did", was cause I "busted" too early...
I "crack" skulls like "brews" that I down in one lick...
YOu "newbies" is old "news" I'M the "new exclusive"...
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Old 12-02-04, 09:48 PM   #7
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Old 12-05-04, 04:32 PM   #8
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Old 12-05-04, 05:45 PM   #9
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Voted For: K-9

Ok by far K-9 this is the best i've seen you do...and Big-S you did an iight job you'll learn what it takes to win a battle when you battle more on here...

Punches-Overall K-9 you had harding hittin punches.....that fit well wit ya vocab....it was nice....keep that coming....i liked how you kept it on topic too....keep it coming..Big-S you had some nice ones too..but you need some more multies and rhyme schemes dont worry you'll get it...

Personals-really none neither of you really dissed on the personal....you just talked shit...and that might win you a battle on the street but on a text....naw....so both need to elavate on this...

Enjoyment-I enjoyed both of ya verses...but I enjoyed K-9's more..i enjoy the simplicity you brought to the battle...somtimes there just nice to have.....but yea keep um coming...it wasn't too bada battle...

Overall-Overall k-9 came harder with the punches and personals...i enjoyed them more..they hit more hard....which kepp me reading on and on...so keep that up there....

Notes:k-9 you had a nice drop overall....but boost on ya multies and Meta's....and Big-S you need to elavate using more complex rhyme schemes...keep it up.....nice.....keep these battles coming...pzz ~1~

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Old 12-11-04, 11:11 AM   #10
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Voted For: Big-Scoot

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to K-9 flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, BIG SCOTT had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Old 01-24-05, 08:40 PM   #11
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Old 01-29-05, 12:06 PM   #12
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Voted For: K-9

aight big scoot spit some wack shit imo be straight up, he rhymes 2 with u, and did it again after a bar. Even his finisher was weak, scoot u rhymed natural with tobacco? dont even sound the same. K-9 did alot better than big just because he had a verse that flowed and some decent punches, played but meh enough to take my vote.

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Old 01-29-05, 01:17 PM   #13
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Voted For: K-9

K-9 takes this one not only for punches but big scoot's flo seemed a little basic to me. k-9 had the multis, punches and the personal sorry to say had imagery...big scoot's punches were kinda basic but they weren't bad. anyway return the favor

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Old 01-29-05, 02:08 PM   #14
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Voted For: K-9

This nigga got a spot in his "draws" where da "shit" show...
He got it from "scootin" his "big" ass down "skid row"...
decent opener
Me slauterin your rhymes prolly "pay" more than it "cost"...
Then you'll have on your "resume", "battled K-9 and lost"...
weak punch
Cause, I'm "virtually" unbeatable, "seer" of the unseeable...
My verses is "holograms", can't "feel 'em", but they readable...
weak, wasn’t feelin it
I keep my verses "cold", less chance for them to "spoil"...
YOur words wouldn't be "fresh" if you "rapped'em" in tin foil...
decent
And the "loss" on my record...belongs to your "girly"...
The only reason she out "did", was cause I "busted" too early...
kinda weak
I "crack" skulls like "brews" that I down in one lick...
YOu "newbies" is old "news" I'M the "new exclusive"...
get rid of the “” and shit…

So u a K-9 huh, well nigga I'm tha dog catcher/
I caught this win and added a loss to ya record/
decent
Niggaz runnin around gassed like a fuckin H-2/
But I'mma have kats shook when they see what I do to u/
weak punch
Foot up a dog's ass like I'm John Witherspoon/
Leave u in ER eatin out a tube like it's a spoon/
weak punch, plus played
All day "It's my Pleasure" schoolin niggaz like u/
Teach u tha basics of rhymin like first grade and 2 + 2/
weak punch again
A lil piece of advice don't fuck wit tha Dream Team/
Cuz we'll be outside ya house holdin 9's wit red beams/
decent
Checkin bitches like u mo than coats at a club/
And please belive I'll lay ya bitch ass out like a rug/
decent
Yo flow is artificial while my shit is all natural/
Chew u up and spit u out like white boys and tobacco/
decent closer

overall, even though this battle was gay…
k-9 hardly took this one, came less weak than big
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Old 02-03-05, 03:25 AM   #15
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Voted For: K-9

ok you win

look you tried alot harder actually i take that back you did not try its just that he didnt care about this win....
you both where pretty damn weak and need so much eleavting....you only ine becuase your metaphores where alot better than his...but they where still wack...just take the time to elevate...but nice structure....

BIG SCOOT...you need to work on your metaphores and your personals..your personals where real weak...HIS NAM EIS k-9...you could have killed him just by playing offf his name......just work harder next time....i cant believe they actaully let you in the dreamteam....that is why the dream team is filled with nothing but newbs and fake vets....just eleavte...but also nice structure

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