Topic: Being on Stage


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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-26-04 at 07:26 AM

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Conclusion has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 06:57 AM.

schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 06:57 AM.

Okay ima set the Scene it’s like a 8 Mile Themed Piece-so it’s Like Underground Mc’ing…This took me about 45 Minute’s coz I was Lazy & fresh outta Idea’s lol G’Luck Schema

Adrenaline Coursing Through The Blood In My Vein's
I was on a Streak,Wettin Mc's dream's Like Rain
I was an Established Role-Model Of the Underground
Populuar, King Of Freestyling & Collab's I was Crowned
Pondering in My DressRoom which was a Gritty Washroom
Thought's were Evaporating & Dissolving While Blankness Loomed
I Dragged myself thru The hallway to Find a Kid Sniffing Coke
Delirious Youth's wasting Live's Might as well Died wit a Rope
The wall's Were Grimey Stained With all Various Sin's
I wanted to make a difference To Live's and Ppl's Kin's
My Expression was Subdued Because this was a Notorious Venue
Drug's, Drink, Adultery, Deceit & Illegal Deal's were all on the Menu
Sweat Gland's Pumping Out Endless Bead's Of Moisture
So close to My Entrance had to keep my Composure
People Slumped On the Damp Floor’s: Producing no movement
I was on top of My Game But this Scenario Forced me to Make an Improvement

Finally, i found myself On stage with a Swarm Of head's Rather Like Locust's
Vast Noise Put me off Balance I was in a Vacant trance: had to repossess my Focus
I was Exploited with Only My Lyric's and a Mic to Interact
Encouragment Expanded My Motivation was off the Hook & Cracked

I Burst Out My Flurrie's On The Crowd Which Swept with Ecstatic Noise
They were Manipulated Like i was a puppet master & they were the toy's
Beat's & Rhytm's Reverbrated Off The Split-Gritty Wall's
Drunken Whore's Tipped & Twisted Crawled & Falled
Dude's Stoned Out their Head's Got Bored & Created Chaos
The Crowd were all one Unit:Now they were amorphous into one Converted Amok
Alcholol was Tossed along With Lighter's & Missile's aimed In Random Direction's
One Of My Homey's got Hit-He couldn't get up like an Incompetent dude & a erection
But My Thought's were Tenious Riddled with Terror & Confusion
The Crowd were like Drone's possesed By a Demonic Hint Of Fusion
After that Encounter i may never Spit my Lyric's or use put Paper to Pen
That Scene Diminshed all meaning Of The Rap Culture-Never Preach My Belief's Again......

Sorry The Structure's Fucked up i dunno how to Change It lol..so sorri if u can't read it proparly..

sound check and im already shakin...damn im breakin up and my name aint even been announced yet...
and yo i dont mean to sound stressed...but I know as soon as I spit that shit comin out my mouth's gon sound wrecked...
im a renowned vet...so why im shaky? why im so damn upset standin on this fuckin round set...
thinkin too much...i aint even opened up my mouth yet...cats starin like "wheres ya nuts? you still aint got a hold on ya sound yet?"...
dj throws on some wack out-the-south shit...im flowin now...matchin the deep words up...im still on the underground's edge...
and as long as i dont fall off i'll be the ill top dog...all it takes is a screw face to make the talk stop...
all i gotta do is hold on to a lonely cause of tryin to stay deep with no applause cause cats sleep on the flowin' gods...
stupid fans want a cat that can speak to a ho in songs...
next track he a theif who holdin arms...next track he pac...next track he mobb deep...get his whole image from off the charts...
new cat's hyped you recieve him with open arms...cd in your shoppin cart...
back to the topic im in the groove now...

*steps up to the mic*

"yo,yo...this topic is wack and im tired of it...the end..."

*ROARS of applause*

ill rematch you this weekend with a better topic...i wasnt feelin this one at all...

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Upping this its getting mad slept on niggas VOTE!!!!.................

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Upping for Thsi Mayne been up like two weeks No Vote's...

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checkin the polls....gud battle y'all......

conclusion took this easy though....

pz

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lol

he obviously won hes in my crew....lol

nah but realy this was a tight battle lets get the votes in....

pz

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werd this topic was gayyyy...if this stays open much longer im asking strobe to close it

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Let's Get This Closed..Been up for week's and Schema if we don't get no Vote's in one More day ...Close It...

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