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Old 12-01-04, 08:58 PM   #1
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Big-Scoot vs distilled

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Check in by: 12-04-04 at 08:58 PM

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Old 12-01-04, 08:59 PM   #2
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Big-Scoot has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 08:59 PM.
 
Old 12-01-04, 09:00 PM   #3
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distilled has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 09:00 PM.
 
Old 12-01-04, 09:02 PM   #4
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Do not post your verse here. You must use the form in the first post
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Old 12-01-04, 09:17 PM   #5
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Who the hell are you man??????

SEriously.......
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Old 12-01-04, 09:19 PM   #6
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Detroit's King Nigga, Dream Team General, and yo worse Nightmare


Nuff Said


Realest Niggaz On The Scen Known as The Dream Team/

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Old 12-01-04, 11:59 PM   #7
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When u set a battle wit Big Scoot u don't even wanna show up/
Cuz my rhymes is sickenin when I get the spittin it like throw up/
Fuck baby cuz I'm tha birdman on this block/
Cuz I'm holdin mo birds than a nigga wit chicken pox/
And I know MC's that's glad they blind cuz they don't really wanna see me/
And I bet u wish u was blind cuz u don't really wanna see me/
Cuz u a sweet Nigga like a fag wit diabetes/
And I don't like to repeat myself but u don't really wanna see me/
Cuz to me u nobody like a fuckin John Doe/
Das why you get no respect like a pimp without a hoe/


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Old 12-03-04, 04:21 AM   #8
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This Kid's Delirious, he thinks he's representin The Dream Team,
The Chances of you gettin on there are roughly 1 to infinity,
Why you set-up this battle, honestly I'll never know,
You wouldn't even snag a win if I went and no-showed,
The System would just read and reject your wack verse,
Don't gotta go home, but you gotta get the hell off RapVerse,
Killed you in 6 lines, now I'm runnin a post mortem on ya,
Only way I'd get wack lines, Is if I bought 'em from ya

Noun.........
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Old 12-03-04, 10:26 PM   #9
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Fucka Big Scoot

Dont try vote for yourself either hoe...


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Old 12-03-04, 11:30 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for distilled

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Look This was Silly Bcuz Big Scoot Your gonna loose this for sure mayne i mean dang u Used the same line 3-4 times your not gonna win mayne im sorry to say but wacth the outcome and oh yeah im not gonna vote bcuz i wouldve voted for distilled and Big-Scoot wouldve said i was votin out of the beef we got so i decided not to vote but watch the outcome of this battle now im tellin Ya.....
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Old 12-04-04, 06:20 AM   #11
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Ok man, I see your point.

Someone vote, just so people know we'v posted the verses.

Fucka MAB
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Old 12-04-04, 08:22 PM   #12
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yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA
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Old 12-05-04, 07:12 AM   #13
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Can you explain that a bit more man???

I don't think it will be allowed to just say that
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Old 12-05-04, 07:27 AM   #14
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Voted For: distilled

Dis:
Oh This Was One Sided Flow Was All On DisTilled Structure Was Decent Neat Clean Vocabulary SHort And Sweet Punches Was Hitting Hard I See You Played Of Some Words That's Tight Good Shit Kid...9/10

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Dam Kid Your Structure Was Whacked...Honestly Elivation Is Needed Wasnt Feeling Punches It's Weack Personals Wasnt There Not Very Decen Vocabulary And Flow Just Wasnt Right....6/10

Vote=DisTilled His Verse Came Much Better I Was Feeling THe Flow Vocabulary Was Decent And Structure...Nuff Said...

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Old 12-05-04, 04:18 PM   #15
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Fuck baby cuz I'm tha birdman on this block/
Cuz I'm holdin mo birds than a nigga wit chicken pox/
niggaz with chicken pox hold birds?

And I know MC's that's glad they blind cuz they don't really wanna see me/
And I bet u wish u was blind cuz u don't really wanna see me/
why the hell do you repeat the line twice??

Cuz u a sweet Nigga like a fag wit diabetes/
fags with diabetes are sweet?

This verse confused me.. Don't rhyme a word with itself, it sounds herbish. And only use wordplay if it makes sense. I really can't understand your punches.

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i guess you dissed him more and you had much better flow. Also your punches made sense to me and you didn't keep repeating yourself
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