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Old 01-07-05, 07:26 PM   #1
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<..8..> vs Notorious Verses

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Old 01-07-05, 07:27 PM   #2
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&lt;..8..&gt; has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 07:27 PM.
 
Old 01-07-05, 07:34 PM   #3
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Old 01-07-05, 08:04 PM   #4
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check it
B I G wannabe i hate to tell yah theres no "Life After Death"/
So hold yah breath, and think befo you hit accept/
you ain' gettin no booty because you "Nasty Boy"/
"You Can't Pimp Me" even if yah name was "Pastor Troy"/
I flip battles in no time flat, really yah verses are whack/
yah must be "Ready to Die" comin at me like that/
When I'm rappen nicca's know only "the Skys the Limit"/
I heard Elton Jon jus drop a list of his sex partners an yah in it/
Its true, yeah 8's next victim be this fake name notorious verses/
I'll blow you to pieces and leave yah ridin in 46 herses/
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Old 01-08-05, 05:04 PM   #5
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Dis Octagon Fake Like Apple Cider, U Got "Murked" Like Nails On Tires*
My Rank's Higher, Spit Fire. I Thought U Had Gotten Better But U Can't Get Past Tyler*
Dis Clippa (Clipper) Don Want It Wit N.Verses..Dog Ull Neva Get Past Me
U From LA, I'm Da Leader And If I'm Impeached U Still Wouldn't B Co B (Kobe)
Son U've Been Ate (8), Watch As I Put Dis Dish Up On Da Plate
Strike Him Out, And Leave Dis "Rappa" Mo' Phony Dan OG Loc Tapes
Dont eNVy Greats, Take Months To Elevate Out Like Ur Birth Was Late
Let's Rotate, Check Da Rates, Cuz Of Emcees Like U, RV Niggaz Is Above D Obese Weight*
"Da Reel Punisha", Hold Ur Words Captive Cuz Ur Lyrical Stench Is Worse Than Average
I Gave Ya Ten Lines But Lets Face It, I Beat U In Last Passage!


* He Losin To Dis Guy Named Murk
* Tyler Is Whopped His Ass (5-0)
* Dats How Much Time Dis Dude Been Ate...lol
 
Old 01-08-05, 05:08 PM   #6
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good drop dog, anyway uppin fo votes ^^^^^
lets go
 
Old 01-08-05, 05:15 PM   #7
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both were self glorifyin yo...but 8 backed it up with harder punches..structures were *clears thoat* but 8's own was a lil betta..NV ya had him on vocabs and metaz..but u were based on yaself a lil too much...and that made like more than half of ur verse too off..8 had a nice closer...and with this he gets my vote..
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Old 01-08-05, 05:16 PM   #8
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hmmmm....uppin fo mo votes ^^^^^
c'mon people vote
 
Old 01-08-05, 07:34 PM   #9
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

V/notorious verses..........his verse was all around better wit good creative punchs an vocab......8 ur verse lacked creativity an good vocab wit not any different punchs.......elavate no hate
punchs=nv
vocab=nv
multis=nv
structure=nv
overall=nv
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Old 01-08-05, 07:35 PM   #10
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

my vote goes to notorious verses overall i think this was a good battle
notorious had good punches
sick ass multies
good vocabulary
but his flaw was the structure lines was dum long and he put like 2 bars into 1 punchline

8 was good as hell too
he had wordplay that a lotta niggas dont really have
his punches were good but not better than notorious'
his structure was good
im not sure on the multis

good verses on both sides
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Old 01-09-05, 12:04 AM   #11
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

Nv Took This By Eaze And Quit Typin Like Me Cus
Openor=Nv,His Had A Decent Punch,And Good Wordplay
Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=Nv,Cus He Didnt Refer Ta Biggie As Much
Personals=Nv His Personals Wass Koo
Vokab=None Fix That
Closer=Nv Closed His Out Ok Good Punch Cus

Nv,Have Some Betta Punches Use Decent Vokab And Up Ya Punches

/V Notorious Verses............
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Old 01-09-05, 05:30 PM   #12
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aite family, uppin on dis battle ^^^^^^^^^
i noe more people wanna vote
 
Old 01-09-05, 07:01 PM   #13
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kinda hard

flow both
style nv
punches nv
personnals nv
opener nv not really but
closer nv
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Old 01-09-05, 07:19 PM   #14
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thanks man, uppin dis battle, 1 more vote to victory ^^^
 
Old 01-09-05, 07:29 PM   #15
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<..8..> Verse

B I G wannabe i hate to tell yah theres no "Life After Death"/
So hold yah breath, and think befo you hit accept/
no...it wasnt a punch just talking

you ain' gettin no booty because you "Nasty Boy"/
"You Can't Pimp Me" even if yah name was "Pastor Troy"/
ok...very weak though

I flip battles in no time flat, really yah verses are whack/
yah must be "Ready to Die" comin at me like that/
another biggie one...eh ok

When I'm rappen nicca's know only "the Skys the Limit"/
I heard Elton Jon jus drop a list of his sex partners an yah in it/
lol...another biggie setup but the punch was ok

Its true, yeah 8's next victim be this fake name notorious verses/
I'll blow you to pieces and leave yah ridin in 46 herses/
hmm...nah it was just talking like a threat, wasnt a punch

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Dis Octagon Fake Like Apple Cider, U Got "Murked" Like Nails On Tires*
My Rank's Higher, Spit Fire. I Thought U Had Gotten Better But U Can't Get Past Tyler*
ok...but i dont know who tyler is lol

Dis Clippa (Clipper) Don Want It Wit N.Verses..Dog Ull Neva Get Past Me
U From LA, I'm Da Leader And If I'm Impeached U Still Wouldn't B Co B (Kobe)
hmm...ok

Son U've Been Ate (8), Watch As I Put Dis Dish Up On Da Plate
Strike Him Out, And Leave Dis "Rappa" Mo' Phony Dan OG Loc Tapes
lol pretty good with the OG Loc thing...

Dont eNVy Greats, Take Months To Elevate Out Like Ur Birth Was Late
Let's Rotate, Check Da Rates, Cuz Of Emcees Like U, RV Niggaz Is Above D Obese Weight*
eh wasnt really a good punch but ok it had a couple multies

"Da Reel Punisha", Hold Ur Words Captive Cuz Ur Lyrical Stench Is Worse Than Average
I Gave Ya Ten Lines But Lets Face It, I Beat U In Last Passage!
[/b]last passage?...wasnt really feelin that the setup was good but could of come better in the last line[/b]

overall it was an ok battle kinda weak but notorious won for more witty and harder punches no hate to both good luck

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