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01-07-05, 07:26 PM | #1 | ||||
Flyweight
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<..8..> vs Notorious Verses
IP: 197A CA8C
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-10-05 at 07:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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01-07-05, 07:27 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 197A CA8C
<..8..> has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 07:27 PM.
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01-07-05, 07:34 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 07:34 PM.
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01-07-05, 08:04 PM | #4 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 197A CA8C
check it
B I G wannabe i hate to tell yah theres no "Life After Death"/ So hold yah breath, and think befo you hit accept/ you ain' gettin no booty because you "Nasty Boy"/ "You Can't Pimp Me" even if yah name was "Pastor Troy"/ I flip battles in no time flat, really yah verses are whack/ yah must be "Ready to Die" comin at me like that/ When I'm rappen nicca's know only "the Skys the Limit"/ I heard Elton Jon jus drop a list of his sex partners an yah in it/ Its true, yeah 8's next victim be this fake name notorious verses/ I'll blow you to pieces and leave yah ridin in 46 herses/ |
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01-08-05, 05:04 PM | #5 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
Dis Octagon Fake Like Apple Cider, U Got "Murked" Like Nails On Tires*
My Rank's Higher, Spit Fire. I Thought U Had Gotten Better But U Can't Get Past Tyler* Dis Clippa (Clipper) Don Want It Wit N.Verses..Dog Ull Neva Get Past Me U From LA, I'm Da Leader And If I'm Impeached U Still Wouldn't B Co B (Kobe) Son U've Been Ate (8), Watch As I Put Dis Dish Up On Da Plate Strike Him Out, And Leave Dis "Rappa" Mo' Phony Dan OG Loc Tapes Dont eNVy Greats, Take Months To Elevate Out Like Ur Birth Was Late Let's Rotate, Check Da Rates, Cuz Of Emcees Like U, RV Niggaz Is Above D Obese Weight* "Da Reel Punisha", Hold Ur Words Captive Cuz Ur Lyrical Stench Is Worse Than Average I Gave Ya Ten Lines But Lets Face It, I Beat U In Last Passage! * He Losin To Dis Guy Named Murk * Tyler Is Whopped His Ass (5-0) * Dats How Much Time Dis Dude Been Ate...lol |
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01-08-05, 05:08 PM | #6 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
good drop dog, anyway uppin fo votes ^^^^^
lets go |
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01-08-05, 05:15 PM | #7 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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IP: DBE8 6BEE
Voted For: &lt;..8..&gt;
both were self glorifyin yo...but 8 backed it up with harder punches..structures were *clears thoat* but 8's own was a lil betta..NV ya had him on vocabs and metaz..but u were based on yaself a lil too much...and that made like more than half of ur verse too off..8 had a nice closer...and with this he gets my vote..
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01-08-05, 05:16 PM | #8 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
hmmmm....uppin fo mo votes ^^^^^
c'mon people vote |
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01-08-05, 07:34 PM | #9 | |||
freeze
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: Notorious Verses
V/notorious verses..........his verse was all around better wit good creative punchs an vocab......8 ur verse lacked creativity an good vocab wit not any different punchs.......elavate no hate punchs=nv vocab=nv multis=nv structure=nv overall=nv *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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01-08-05, 07:35 PM | #10 | ||||
NOK
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Notorious Verses
my vote goes to notorious verses overall i think this was a good battle notorious had good punches sick ass multies good vocabulary but his flaw was the structure lines was dum long and he put like 2 bars into 1 punchline 8 was good as hell too he had wordplay that a lotta niggas dont really have his punches were good but not better than notorious' his structure was good im not sure on the multis good verses on both sides |
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01-09-05, 12:04 AM | #11 | |||||
Gone
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IP: C295 AD2A
Voted For: Notorious Verses
Nv Took This By Eaze And Quit Typin Like Me Cus Openor=Nv,His Had A Decent Punch,And Good Wordplay Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read Punches=Nv,Cus He Didnt Refer Ta Biggie As Much Personals=Nv His Personals Wass Koo Vokab=None Fix That Closer=Nv Closed His Out Ok Good Punch Cus Nv,Have Some Betta Punches Use Decent Vokab And Up Ya Punches /V Notorious Verses............
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01-09-05, 05:30 PM | #12 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
aite family, uppin on dis battle ^^^^^^^^^
i noe more people wanna vote |
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01-09-05, 07:01 PM | #13 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: FFA4 281F
Voted For: Notorious Verses
kinda hard flow both style nv punches nv personnals nv opener nv not really but closer nv
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01-09-05, 07:19 PM | #14 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 3240 794D
thanks man, uppin dis battle, 1 more vote to victory ^^^
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01-09-05, 07:29 PM | #15 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: Notorious Verses
<..8..> Verse B I G wannabe i hate to tell yah theres no "Life After Death"/ So hold yah breath, and think befo you hit accept/ no...it wasnt a punch just talking you ain' gettin no booty because you "Nasty Boy"/ "You Can't Pimp Me" even if yah name was "Pastor Troy"/ ok...very weak though I flip battles in no time flat, really yah verses are whack/ yah must be "Ready to Die" comin at me like that/ another biggie one...eh ok When I'm rappen nicca's know only "the Skys the Limit"/ I heard Elton Jon jus drop a list of his sex partners an yah in it/ lol...another biggie setup but the punch was ok Its true, yeah 8's next victim be this fake name notorious verses/ I'll blow you to pieces and leave yah ridin in 46 herses/ hmm...nah it was just talking like a threat, wasnt a punch Notorious Verses Verse Dis Octagon Fake Like Apple Cider, U Got "Murked" Like Nails On Tires* My Rank's Higher, Spit Fire. I Thought U Had Gotten Better But U Can't Get Past Tyler* ok...but i dont know who tyler is lol Dis Clippa (Clipper) Don Want It Wit N.Verses..Dog Ull Neva Get Past Me U From LA, I'm Da Leader And If I'm Impeached U Still Wouldn't B Co B (Kobe) hmm...ok Son U've Been Ate (8), Watch As I Put Dis Dish Up On Da Plate Strike Him Out, And Leave Dis "Rappa" Mo' Phony Dan OG Loc Tapes lol pretty good with the OG Loc thing... Dont eNVy Greats, Take Months To Elevate Out Like Ur Birth Was Late Let's Rotate, Check Da Rates, Cuz Of Emcees Like U, RV Niggaz Is Above D Obese Weight* eh wasnt really a good punch but ok it had a couple multies "Da Reel Punisha", Hold Ur Words Captive Cuz Ur Lyrical Stench Is Worse Than Average I Gave Ya Ten Lines But Lets Face It, I Beat U In Last Passage! [/b]last passage?...wasnt really feelin that the setup was good but could of come better in the last line[/b] overall it was an ok battle kinda weak but notorious won for more witty and harder punches no hate to both good luck peace
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