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Old 01-24-05, 10:46 PM   #16
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Voted For: Phantom

Flow:
Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
blah
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
ok meta
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
this was wack
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
wtf was this man, no no no never
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
meh
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
blah, shitty meta
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
ummm, plizayed

Soc:
Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
ok personel
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
nice
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
lol ok not bad
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
decent personel
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
lmao, striaght fire, I loved this line
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
I don't know his aim name
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
lol ok meta, not bad

Both you did not drop your hardest, flow, I felt you came wack like you weren't trying, that was the vibe I got, and Soc managed to take you in this one

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Old 01-24-05, 11:12 PM   #17
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Old 01-24-05, 11:42 PM   #18
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Voted For: Phantom


Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
ok, good but punch was bland...
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
no, filler at large, no punch at all..jus pretty fake multi's
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
i shuttered when i read this,...ive heard it n seen it,....tsk tsk..
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
.another shutter......
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
this was aight....
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
lol...oo,...but not hard hitting
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch

very weak for a closer flow, impreesed by a ine but depressed to see played or bitten scripts(my opinion)...but not a bad verse overall, i jus have a sense of question..(why'd you switch up the flow)..
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SOC

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Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
ok, decent but simple
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
ehh, nah..
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
close but no.....
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
nice, best so far..personal was dope
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
lol...good punch...
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
i liked how you said simply...good meta's..
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
blah, weak closer, but not tottally lame soc....
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not bad from both ends....overall flow had 2 lines i liked....(yes lines.>>!\)meanwhile soc had 3 bars that where gold for simple text, nice personal n meta use through out his verse.
Yea...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 01-24-05, 11:55 PM   #19
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
Yea I had it a different way but when I was keying it up it slipped my mind, I thought that would be pretty obvious...

it was but still wasnt dope but a good apoach for ya last 3 bars..which were dope
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 01-25-05, 04:22 AM   #20
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Voted For: Phantom

Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
^^^nice...
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
^^^wack here...weak anyway.
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
^^^weak punch here...and getting the w & o the wrong way round makes it more a punch instead of a personal
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
^^^aight personal...
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
^^^ehhhhhh.....
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
^^^^weakest line in battle
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne
^^^decent

Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
^^^decent
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
^^^it's pretty good
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
^^^multis galore...but nothing great
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
^^^hmmmmm...not that good
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
^^^self glorifing...
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
^^^it's aight
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
^^^hmmm.....decent.

Overall both yall came weak, but vote Flow for more consistency and harder hitting punches than wack ones

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Old 01-25-05, 04:24 AM   #21
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Whoops, I was suppose to have voted for FI, I'll have it changed...
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Old 01-25-05, 04:48 AM   #22
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Voted For: Phantom

well you get this win....


FLOW: you had some nice lines and nice multies but your metaphores where not all that great......your bet line was the one about ali holding a globe......i liked that but that was the only line that i liked..... just work on your punches and metaphores...you could also work on personals..... if oyu had atleast one more bar of a nice ass metaphorical persasonal than you would have won.....also your structure was offf a lil bit....

PHANTOM: you had my attention the whole time...i love personals....it shows that you have real skill becuase you cant prewrite a personal...or bite a personal......so you good job with the personals.......you almost lost this battle becuase that FLWO...line didnt really work becuase thats not how you spell FLOW......but yeah nice metaphores and nice punches........good battle...nice structure.......we all no you mastered text no start with the AUDIO................

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Old 01-25-05, 12:51 PM   #23
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i can't believe its tied 3 3 ...this shouldve been a ko n soc's win..
what a fuckin joke with the riders for flow...............
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 01-31-05, 03:38 PM   #24
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i think flow intelligent took this, but i cant vote for him cause he bit a lil wayne line..."dodgeball with bullets"

tis, tis....BITER


good drop tho, u would ve got tha vote if u wouldve left that out...

phantom, u had some nice punches and metteas in there, that made me wunna give u tha vote...but i cant vote on this....cause he's a biter
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Old 02-01-05, 02:03 AM   #25
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Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
decent opener-- but punch is meh.. not what i expect
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
decent-- dutch blunt dont exist tho... dutchies and blunts dont coexist in same rapper... punch is understood but still, kinda seemed forced.
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
this was a good bar, good stop go flow, no punches more self glorification but thats cool...
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
simple punch, kinda effective not bad..
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
lol... this was kinda funny- not a relevant concept, but not bad.
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
lol... o.k ill give u this one.
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
eh.. hits bitch, easy rhyme... simple closer... i expected more... but not bad in general...


Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
LoL-- this was solid right here... nice opener.
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
o.k
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
lol wow... creative, i liked it.
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
lol... he got personal on every line. damn
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
lol... nice wordplay, solid punch again. Im feelin this alot so far.
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
Im not down w/ his aim name or whats goin on here.. but ima play like i know whats goin on...
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
lol... not a super original concept... but I think all in all his verse hit alot harder, alot more witty- alot more to the point-- vote phantom.
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Old 02-06-05, 03:49 AM   #26
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Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
good persona, decent punch
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
decent punch, wasn’t much hard hitting
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
spelled it backwards, weak punch here
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
good persona, pretty decent punch
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
decent punch
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
weak punch, ain’t feeling it here
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
weak punch here, not really a hard hitting punch tho

Overall you had a good drop
Decent personas
Punches were decent, some weak & some were okay
Structure was in place and not stretched
Flow was good
Vocab was okay, work on that
Overall you had a good drop…
6/10

Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
[b]nice multi’s, good punch

I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
good multi’s used here, decent punch
Then blazed and smoked...Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrasions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
good punch, nice use of multi’s again, punch landed
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
decent multi’s, punch was okay
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
weak punch, wasn’t feelin this punch though
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
decent multi’s, punch was good, landed
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
decent closer
Overall you had a good drop too
Punches were hard hitting all the way except for 1
Multi’s were good, used thru out whole drop
Vocab was okay here
Didn’t see any personas though
Structure was in place
Flow was pretty good here

Overall you had a good drop too
7/10
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Old 02-06-05, 09:40 PM   #27
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Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
HAHAHA OH SHIT DOPE FUCKING CREATIVE PERSONAL HERE 10/10
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
HAHA DAMN I HAD TO READ THAT TWICE CUZ I AINT GET IT AT FIRST DAMN IM DUMBANYWAYS SHIT IS A DOPE NAME PLAY HERE 8/10
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
GOOD PERSONAL BUT I AINT LIKE THE WORDING SHIT AINT RHYME RIGHT AND THAT HURT IT 5/10
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
HAHAHAHA OH SHIT LMFAO DOPE PERSONAL AGAIN HAHAHA 10/10
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
DAMN ANOTHER DOPE PERSONAL NAME PLAY 8/10
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
NO PLAYED AND WACK AS SHIT 2/10
43/60 PRETTY GOOD A FEW DOPE ASS PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS HERE DAMN SOME REAL DOPE ONES CLOSER WAS WACK AS FUCK THOUGH YET STILL YOUR VERSE WAS STRONG AS FUCK GOOD VOCAB AND STRTURE DISSES AND PERSONALS WERE ALL ON POINT ALSO BEST IVE SEEN FROM YOU IN A LONG TIME.


Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALK NO PERSONAL EITHER 2/10
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
AGAIN NO PUNCH OR PERSONAL 2/10
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
SELF GLORY STILL NO PERSONAL OR PUNCH HERE 2/10
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
WACK AS FUCK AND PLAYED HORRIBLE 1/10
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
FINIALLY A FUCKING PUNCH NOT A DOPE ONE BUT DECENT 4/10
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
YOU KNOW BETTER THEN THIS:NONO:GUNPLAY NONO NO NO NO AND ITS PLAYED AND WACK 1/10
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
NO PUNCH AT ALL AGAIN JUST SHIT TALKING 1/10
DO I EVEN NEED TO ADD THAT?NO ANYWAYS NO PUNCHES EXCEPT ONE PLAYED WACK ONE NO PERSONALS EITHER NO GOOD WORDPLAY OR ANYTHING THAT WINS BATTLES DOPE FLOW THOUGH BUT WHO CARES?FLOW DONT WIN BATTLES ESPECIALLY IN TEXT SOC WON THIS HANDS DOWN EASY AS FUCK DUDE TO YOU HAVING NO PUNCHES OR PERSONALS DOING NO EFFECT ON YOUR OPPENANT THIS WAS HORRIBLE
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