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M.A.F.i.A vs Melancholy
IP: 03A1 A28A
Battle Rules:
20-26 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting This is a topical battle. The Topic Is...Missing Someone... ...Good Luck... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-29-05 at 01:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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IP:
The way I miss you...it's like I'm missing my heart... ...In a dark cold place...the vile sweetnes of sorrow is tart I sit alone...the wind rustling the curtians of my room... ...The candlelight relfects off of the bottle...casting a shadowy gloom Another shot down...another tear down my cheek... ...It feels like years...and its only been a couple of weeks The emptiness in my skin...the shivers through my flesh... ...I just think and sit...when am I going to see you next..? Do you even miss me too? Confusion in my head... ...I can feel the dread...already I may as well be dead I die inside...phsyically I am beginning to fade... ...The way that it feels like a year...and its only a day I write down the poem...I am writing in my drunkeness... ...Because how much I love you...only poetry can confess I love you so much...and I miss you every second... ...If I don't see you soon...I will die, my own hands as a weapon I sit and cry...just dreaming and I am lost in recollection... ....You are the most purest thing in my life, my own deinfection I miss you so much...and it sends fierce chills down my back... ....The bottle cracks, as I let the rest of the whiskey slide back.... ...Quick...I've peep this kids shit, this should be enough...
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IP:
It was the last day, if only i knew before/
I woulda stopped ma baby before she walked out that door/ God took her to early, for she had not yet lived life/ Now she cant live to be my laufly wedded wife/ I looked out the window to see my baby walk/ But her beuty faded, when she felt tha rath from that glock/ Red stains on her white dress/ Since her death i cannot rest/ Why would this happen, for who did she hurt/ Someone had to of stalked more than slim shady lurks/ Sweet as can be/ EverY guys dream/ Now as i sit here lonlier than ever/ I dwell on our love that would have lasted forever/ Head in my pillow, soaked by my lonesome tears/ Replaying her voice from my brain to my ears/ She feels closer than ever, as if we were making a connection/ Remembering the last time i showed her my love and affection/ If only god was to give me one chance to relive my love and stop her from dying/ I would not have to end every nite by myself crying/ 2 months later, i had visited the grave/ To visit my baby that i could not save/
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M.A.F.i.A ......Tha MAFIA
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