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01-29-05, 02:41 PM | #16 | ||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
wow y would u check da polls tho fam???...might as well vote
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01-29-05, 06:17 PM | #17 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: 5043 32F4
whoa.......nice battle here....checkin polls......
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01-29-05, 11:10 PM | #18 | |||||
Throwback
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IP: F98A 46E1
lol............uppin.............................. ..............
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02-01-05, 06:25 AM | #19 | ||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
vote muthafukkaz
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02-01-05, 02:17 PM | #20 | ||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name weak and simple... not good. Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch Im not really feelin it, but Ill give u this one. decent punch. Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life eh, your rhyme scheme is very very simple- and your insults are similar. Try to up the content in the future. Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again yea yeah... o.k Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit man-- ur rhymin picked up here... but this punch could have hit so much harder if you spent some time and re-worded it... as it is now its just average all the way through. Really work on upping the content of your verses. mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum wow, u both need to up your content... weak weak opener in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun... beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1 decent personal, probly the best bar so far in the battle... im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?... his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by" rhyme scheme is real sloppy- punch is horriffic- in a not good way. im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records" arright... this isn't the most original concept but at least its a bonofide punchline w/ a lil wordplay... thank you. sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds.... u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig could have written it better- saying got illdiplomats and got eystyle just like that kills any flow to that point.... but good route of attack. my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own" real basic, but o.k u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga.. but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer o.k-- not a great closer... however you threw more punches than ur opponent... you connected more, I found that your verse while being fairly basic was more complex than your opponents also... Vote MarvJay
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02-01-05, 03:23 PM | #21 | ||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum 4/10 in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun... beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1 6/10 im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?... his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by" 7/10 im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records "7/10 sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds.... u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig 4/10 my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own" 7/10 u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga.. but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer 1/10 u had nice concepts punches were kinda lame ya wordplay wasent there ya intensity wasent there nice Multi's and Metas could of worked on your delivery and punches Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name 4/10 Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch 6/10 Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life 5/10 Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again 5/10 Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit 6/10 punches were ok no real wordplay ya drop could have been better ya concepts were nice ya drop was kinda basic seen alot better from u
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02-01-05, 04:16 PM | #22 | ||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
okay uppin 4 more votes
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02-01-05, 10:23 PM | #23 | ||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records" ^^^ only witty punch.... all the rest didn't have wordplay or i've already heard 'em like... he's up and down like his wack ass name, and jay's crutch line... all the rest were real weak punches, they were just tellin the trueth. your sopposed to take the diss that is true and make worplay out of it. tutorials much?
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