Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-03-05 at 05:00 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

Mc Will Power has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 04:32 PM.

Cannibal Fetus has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 04:33 PM.

Look my name is mc will-power youl feel the power of my punch when i punch u in the jaw, make your jaw fill really saw, make your feet levetate from the flore so wotch out coz i raw

You got the will? Na-uh, I'mma crush this noob.
Kid suck's my ass so much, He bite's when I moon.
He's gay, I mean, ain't this the guy outta Will & Grace?
Cuz after I finish, I'll dismantle Will's nose from his face.
There that's all I can bother, typing, Ooop's I mean Writing.
Cuz frankly this dickhead, ain't worth a Cannibal Fetus smiting.

G'luck.

Voted For: Cannibal Fetus

well this was certainly an easy battle to choose the winner........

cannibal.........
You got the will? Na-uh, I'mma crush this noob.
Kid suck's my ass so much, He bite's when I moon.
decent opener....it hit ok.....

He's gay, I mean, ain't this the guy outta Will & Grace?
Cuz after I finish, I'll dismantle Will's nose from his face.
hit ok......it works

There that's all I can bother, typing, Ooop's I mean Writing.
Cuz frankly this dickhead, ain't worth a Cannibal Fetus smiting.
ok closer......

overall this was just an ok verse....nothin more....nothin less....


MC will..........
work on your structure...its terrible....go read some of the tutorials and elevate tremendously.....you didnt even throw a punch......

vote.....cannibal for throwing punches

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cannible ull get get ur neck cut from ear to ear!!
me be named from hear to ziear, im on point like an infra red-dred--Leave u dead
1 time, spit a rime shit im free styling of my minde, i dun no u come with ur pree writen-
Aint representing great britain!
Look my flow so cold it got u frost bitten, ur smitten. Ur girls pussy like a kitten yeh i fucked it wot blad wot u saying u aint got shit, im will power freestyling ill bust ur bottem lip.

u gonna reply or not m8 ****ing hell
u pussying out or summin

lets get this closed, he sucks da balls yo. I am better than him. Dumb 50 characters.

I'm so fly, Give me all the votes yo.
Beep-bop-beep-bop.

Voted For: Cannibal Fetus

this battle wasn't hot at all... anywayz here's the critique:

Cannibal Fetus had more lines one punch to take the win compared to Mc Will Power's long line of rambling, your structure is really messed up, i have no idea what you were tryna say to her.. ya rhyme was more simpler than CF... i think you need to practice before you start battling, go to the Tutorial section for advice on punches, metaphors and the whole set-up... but how this battle lookin, Cannibal Fetus won this one..
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you must not know the system of battling, you battle with one verse.. not two in this system.......................... there's no two rounds you'd have to set up another battle.....
pz

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fuck that i know that if he came down to my endz hede get fucked on the mic
ill practice my structure and everything, thanx for the advice.
And for voting

Voted For: Cannibal Fetus

Cannibal Fetus gets ths easy had some ok punches came weak but didnt rly need it ok verse u had thoughmc will power u came rly wack u sud be d/q 4 being under the line littit but werd battle good verse from Cannibal Fetus just keep elevating and doing ya thang nice punhes u had

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