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upfront vs DiZeE
IP: 4CFB 235B
Battle Rules:
16 bars or less No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-08-05 at 12:30 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: 4CFB 235B
upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 12:31 AM.
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IP: 496D 5AB7
DiZeE has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 12:50 AM.
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IP: 496D 5AB7
they call u upfront cause thats how im servin u up close and personal , they call me dizee cause im goin to leave u raped and twisted u might be kinda gifted your soul bout to get lifted shifted and shit in , dont know how long u goin to take how many lines u goin to make more shit u make more reason 4 me to call u fake just like your style u probly been in this sight for a while but im bout to leave u abandoned like a deadly vile hopfully u got a ok style now that im here never goin to stop flows never stop wit a clock more shots than a glock shittin on u like a flock of birds wit deadly words leavin u soak and wet cause im spittin deadly verds
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IP: 4CFB 235B
iight,,
les go dis nigga dizee from all the shots he took at the neck/ how u gunna come on a site and face me u guarenteed no respect/ u less experienced cat wen u walked by my "fagdar" started to detect/ i should bring ya weathered ass down to earth wit my doppler effect/ s0o u can spit all u want but battlin me was jus a dumb mistake/ wit one movement ill put ya lights out like birthday cakes/ gettin hoes dizee is the only way this nigga get pussy,mayne he relentless/ my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/ u couldnt touch fire and become hott/ nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/ tha dope flo have yo ass sayin ohh no / have ya shit twisted then ud start to feel like a homo/ battle me can leave y0o ass froze like fuckin eskimoes/ one las thing ill put shells on ya feet like adidas shoes/ n if that dont work ill rearange ya face like arubic cubes//// ~peace~ vote on it thanks
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Let God Be With You
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IP: 2437 C278
Voted For: upfront
this battle goes to upfront becasue he had better structure harder punches good vocab and he had great multis dizee u need to work on ur structure and ur vocab ure drop was alright yet u need to improve it upfronts favorite lines: gettin hoes dizee is the only way this nigga get pussy,mayne he relentless/ my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/ u couldnt touch fire and become hott/ nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/
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Let God Be With You
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IP: 2437 C278
ay people can u please return tha favor
on my batlle vs. topspit
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IP: 4CFB 235B
np uppin uppin
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IP: B7EB 8905
Voted For: upfront
punches-up persnals-up flow-none struc-dizzee vocab-up upfont easy got this...punches were harder had a few personals bit weak but yeah he had some dizzee came weak had a few weak punches not worth it though didnt prove him good up takes this easy
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: upfront
structure was tha main reason in this one. dizea, ur structure was wack, and i also wasnt feelin yo structure, upfront, but u came harder. u had some nice punches and wordplay, but some lines seemed a lil play'd. no hate tho, just elevate in originality.. dizae,ur structure took it away, tha worst i ever seen. i seen no wordplay, no punches, no good vocab, i just think ur verse got off a lil simple...no hate tho, just elevate.. overall-upfront got this one by far...no hate...he just had a better overall verse... plz return tha vote favor on battle link in sig...pick one, and plz make it xplained fully, cause i took my time out to vote on this one and explain it... ~1~ |
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IP: F6F7 71FC
uppin thanks keep em comin ~peace~
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IP: F6F7 71FC
uppin..... uppin uppin uppin
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IP: F6F7 71FC
uppin uppin uppin
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This is my first post!
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: upfront
upfront took this plain and simple. upfront had good structure, good flow, some allright punches. some personals, a little bit of wordplay and multi action. and he came across pretty hard. dizee you basically just wrote a paragraph. no structure at all, to hard to pick out aflow or anything this way. you gotta fix your structure and make out your lines into bars. v/ upfront return the favour, link is in the sig |
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IP: 34D2 D886
Voted For: upfront
DiZee- just like your style u probly been in this sight for a while but im bout to leave u abandoned like a deadly vile ^^best bar......... you need to fix your structure tho.. you had some aight attempts but you shouldn't bunch up your verse like a paragraph.. Upfront: u couldnt touch fire and become hott/ nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/ ^^best bar and best bar in the WHOLE battle.. this was a nice punch lol... both you had an aight flow, but upfront i feel you came harder and had better attempts and concepts of punches, that's why you win this battle... this is pretty one-sided perhaps a KO... stay up.. 1
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