Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

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punch-ren
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vocab-ren
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ren cmae a little bit hard close battle both came weak and need to elevate but ren win this battle came a little hard with the punches

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Voted For: phive

Phive:my goes to you,for better creativity,yo give you a trick...make lines like this:
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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx x.....iight lol so like that you have more chance winning,iight this was your best battle that i saw so far,we maybe had beef but true..

Khaos_daRenegade:your structure was lil bit off...dunno i wsint feeling really your verse,but still,dats why your here...to elevate...dont say shit like "im ready,lets go" lol sounds gay

nuff said,my vote goes to : Phive

yo dame dat vote wasnt explained worth shit u need to do more or it doesnt count

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LYRICALLY KILLIN BITCHES

you'd better keep your lines not going on

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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

V/Khaos_DaRenegade........he gets my vote cause of his use of punchs an personals wit better structure.....phive u did elavate from other times i read ur stuff u had sum good lines in this verse but u need to work on ur structure an work on being consistent an creative wit ur diss's.....no hate ....jus elavate......
punchs=Khaos
vocab=khaos
structure=khaos
opener=khaos
closer=khaos
overall=khaos_daRenegade
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thanx freeze yoooooooo uppin dis shit for more vote just two more and i win lets go peeps i will return the favor if u need votes drop a link

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Voted For: phive

yo im going to have to go wit phive on dis one...he had good multis...more than chaos and he had punches that hit ok but they weren't hard...but they still did the job...his structure was not good...yo man u should put ur rhymes in bars trust me,it will help the reader damn!...and he had better vocabulary...

chaos had the structure...and some ok punches, also he had a personal in there...but phive took it yo!!

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Unknown Legend...

uppin this shit we need more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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uppin dis shit for more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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can yall return da favor.....................thanks.

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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn this shit we need more votes come on peeps i killed him lets just get it ova with

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uppin fo some votes playas ill retutn tha favour

uppin ill return tha favour............................................ .......