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Old 02-03-05, 06:41 AM   #16
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Old 02-04-05, 04:12 PM   #17
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Old 02-04-05, 05:46 PM   #18
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this battle was wack...but i aint no hater...dj took this one wit harder punches and better rhyming...yo structure was coo, but that wasnt really a factor in this one. i think u should work on consistency in ur verses. not all ur barz were hot, and i think these were too short.
karma-u had an okay verse, but i really wasnt feelin it...too much of u tryna diss wit personals which took u away from harder puncehs and other stuff...i think u should elevate on that. but u did come wit some good wordplay, but i think dj got u on this one, and i think u kno it...
overall-this battle was kinda soft, but still some okay punches and disses in here. not tha best, but prolly not tha worst..

plz RTF on battle link in sig against DT, that crew battle is gettin slept on...and plz xplain it

good drop, but still elevate

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Old 02-04-05, 11:27 PM   #19
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^^^thank you...i will vote later........................
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Old 02-05-05, 03:56 AM   #20
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can we get some fucking voters i this bitch................
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Old 02-05-05, 04:57 AM   #21
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This bitch claims to be hard...just cuz he attained an erection.
But, you still couldn't throw punches, affiliating with boxing connection's.
PLAYED AS FUCK 2/10
I'll drop this fag, quicker than football coaches to drunken athletes.
D.j's misunderstood...cuz he actually stand's under my feet.
WACK ALSO NO PUNCH THERE JUST ALOT OF SHIT TALKING 2/10
Em sce tried to shake me, but really d.j em sce thinking who am I?
Well, I can tell ya this, I'm the dude d.j gon done chose for suicide.
AGAIN NO PUNCH JUST BULLSHIT SHIT TALKING 2/10
CANNA THIS IS FUCKING WACK PUNCHES WERE EITHER PLAYED OR NON EXISITENTHERE FLOW AND STRUTURE IS GOOD VOCAB IS GOOD TOO YOUR SUPER WEAK PLAYED PUNCH AND ABSENCE OF ANY OTHER REALLY HURT YOU 6/30

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your punchlines dont reach me its like your verbally shadow boxing
lrycally stopping these dick riders by verbally cock blocking
NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALK 2/10
i never spit first cuz these BITING mcs FEED off my verses
i even aint at my apex but still on top of hip hops surface
AGAIN SELF GLORY WHICH IS WACK AND NO PUNCH 2/10
if you was spittin speed bumps, U still couldnt be textin obstacles
MORTAL KOMBAT puttin U in the hospital, ur FATALITY is optional
AGAIN NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALKING 2/10
6/30 OK YOU AINT HAVE NO PUNCHES EITHER FLOW VOCAB AND STRTURE IS GOOD CREATIVITY IS MUCH BETTER THEN CANNABARZ IS WHICH IS GOOD AND HELPED YOU GET MY VOTE HERE
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Old 02-05-05, 05:26 AM   #22
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Sand: Not too bad, wasnt feeling the flow, good metas. Somewhat boring to read tho. Even you said it was wack which backs up my feed...

DJ: Pretty good verse, links always make me happy. Hard opener with mad multies, middle bar was aiight, moderatly hard closer. I love your metas and flow was there. Next time try to lay off the caps tho.

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Old 02-05-05, 01:19 PM   #23
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Old 02-05-05, 03:18 PM   #24
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your punchlines dont reach me its like your verbally shadow boxing
lrycally stopping these dick riders by verbally cock blocking
nice opener punch landed
i never spit first cuz these BITING mcs FEED off my verses
i even aint at my apex but still on top of hip hops surface
punch was decent, flow was good wit it
if you was spittin speed bumps, U still couldnt be textin obstacles
MORTAL KOMBAT puttin U in the hospital, ur FATALITY is optional
cant say its played but it seems like it though…decent punch

you had a decent drop, punches were hard and landed
and the structure + flow was good, decent drop from you


This bitch claims to be hard...just cuz he attained an erection.
But, you still couldn't throw punches, affiliating with boxing connection's.
decent punch, not very-hard hitting though
I'll drop this fag, quicker than football coaches to drunken athletes.
D.j's misunderstood...cuz he actually stand's under my feet.
don’t underline lines, not unless it’s a link, weak punch though
Em sce tried to shake me, but really d.j em sce thinking who am I?
Well, I can tell ya this, I'm the dude d.j gon done chose for suicide.
decent closer, prolly ur best here

overall you had a decent drop, punches were weak though
structure was good and the flow was okay, but not hard enuff
to take the win though
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