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01-20-05, 09:27 PM | #46 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: FFA4 281F
Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
to me this was an easy one lol Flow: Mista Vocab: Mista Style: Mista punches: mista personals: mista opener: mista closer: mista tips: all to infurno. like read good peoples shit and good luck
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01-29-05, 03:18 AM | #47 | |||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: 4F9C E7C6
Voted For: Infurno
aight you win MIS..you had weak personals...although personals always win battles this time it didnt..oyu need to elevate alot..work on your metaphores and expand your vocab......other than that just work on the basics...structure..metaphores..punches....shit like that IN..you have mad potiential....just take the time to elevate and you will be actually pretty nice.........your punches where nice(not the best but for a newb good) also your metaphores where also good for a newb..onvce you elevate you will be good.. vote=inferno
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01-29-05, 03:59 AM | #48 | |||||
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
IP: E74E FF26
nicely dun fam...................................uppin
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02-01-05, 01:40 AM | #49 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Voted For: Infurno
wow.. I know neither of you- no hate to anyone, but Infurno just shitted all up on mistas grill... lemme break it down. Infurno u pursue fire well my punches are cold I’m gonna take your fire out My rhymes are sweet, giving you cavaties, putting multiple holes in your mouth simple simple rhyme-- out and mouth... punches were basic- no real thought necessary to your lines... very cut and dry. Kid you cant handle me. Like your basketball home team, they cant handle balls They cant even shoot, like your punches you wont connect through an net dawg balls and dawg is a forced rhyme-- maybe u could pull it off on a track.. but not here... dissin the chicago bulls? Like your Chicago bulls jerzey I’ll leave multiple holes with bloods all over your body I’m leaving you with no power like Michael Jordan left the bulls, and also like scottie if you spent some time and re-worded this- you could have had a nice bar... as it is its real basic, no wordplay anywhere, nothing hit hard... keep writing, and peep some of the assistance threads. AuTh3nTiQ? this fake's a swingman he cant throwback a punch/ im like a football playa the way im fuckin AuTh3nTiQ's up/ I felt this bar alone could win the battle... its a pretty funny punchline- it struck well... your 3 bars all had decent punches... you could tell you just have more experience than your opponent here... keep doin it... vote infurno.
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02-05-05, 11:56 AM | #50 | ||||
I walk & walk over you
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IP: C821 E440
Damn seven, broked down the facts, lol. Alright good honest vote. let's see some more, uppin.
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02-05-05, 03:29 PM | #51 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Infurno
Infurno u pursue fire well my punches are cold I’m gonna take your fire out My rhymes are sweet, giving you cavaties, putting multiple holes in your mouth decent punch here, it landed Kid you cant handle me. Like your basketball home team, they cant handle balls They cant even shoot, like your punches you wont connect through an net dawg decent, hardly rhymed thought but it was aight Like your Chicago bulls jerzey I’ll leave multiple holes with bloods all over your body I’m leaving you with no power like Michael Jordan left the bulls, and also like Scottie punch was okay, hardly landed though im scorchin dis faggot RV watch as i blaze this herb/ my verse like a crossword puzzle.....ill beat u with a maze of words/ decent punch, it landed here though his intentions ill, but my comprehension kills/ and hes thrown in the Infurno when eva u mention skills/ nice multi’s punchline was weak though AuTh3nTiQ? this fake's a swingman he cant throwback a punch/ im like a football playa the way im fuckin AuTh3nTiQ's up/ LOL…punch was aight, kinda weak though
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02-05-05, 08:56 PM | #52 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: Infurno
infurno too this one...better personals, harder punchlines, and mettas...just a all around better verse. what more is there to say...good drop infurno mista-aight verse, but lacked originality. some of ur lines were play'd, but some aight mettas in there, and aight structure, but couldnt come as hard as infurno in this one... overall-good battle...keep elevating..infurno took it... plz RTF on battle link in sig. plz pick a crew battle, and vote on it, and xplain it, cause i took my time out to vote on this.. ~1~ |
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