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Old 02-04-05, 09:15 PM   #31
DoContinue
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!

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not nearly enuff posts to vote but this was a hot battle. hot came hard on just about every line.. i was impressed. except 4 the last line, that was kinda weird... best lines were "killin ya own career" and the cock tease... both classic... very nice

HG- i liked this spit. I'm glad you took the time to explain the 1st punch. usually i hate explanations, but that made the punch make so much more sense. i say bravo on that wordplay and such...to me, the last line was just really played cuz i heard that joke a million times... were you talkin about the matrix tho (when men;s backs bend)? my extra special favorite line was : I provide cheers... hot "shh" just silences the croud" that line was great... mucho aplauso...
good job both of you
 
Old 02-05-05, 02:43 PM   #32
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well good looking on the feedback and votes, uppin again
 
Old 02-05-05, 03:44 PM   #33
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Voted For: hotshh!

Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames!
nice opener, punch line was hard & connected
Nobody would want to Son you... your disowned, now Disappear
Keep dropping that trash and you gonna be 'Killing ya own Career'
…decent punch here, wasn’t as hard though
Dont call me out cuz in the Tourney I did good and U watched me
You on my Dick... Head games?... I'm renaming You 'Cock Tease'
pretty decent, nutting much here though
If I chopped and threw your dome...you'll get ahead of me Crazy
Da Council should Drop em faster than Mothers with Heavy Babies
pretty decent closer, punch landed

Overall you had a decent drop, punches were hard (well some of them)
And they landed, the structure was in place and the flow to it was good
Overall you had a decent drop………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦

Just take off like "race cars," this kid aint pure
Hot shit? so this faggot really does "burn rubber"
[b]hardly rhymed here, weak punch to it

Like tight clits with big dicks, kid, just fucking "split"
And when talking bout skills, hotshh! aint got "it"
decent I guess, punch wasn’t hard enuff though
And ya rhymes suck, your shit man, shouldn't be proud
I provide chears... hot"shh" just silences the crowd
okay…punch was weak here…
Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"
decent punch, prolly ur best…

Overall you had a decent drop, some of them punches were weak and
Hardly made any connects, flow was good and the structure to it was
Pretty decent…overall you could’ve came way harder……………………………
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Old 02-06-05, 02:06 PM   #34
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good looking on those votes...maybe we can finish this battle today?
 
Old 02-06-05, 08:35 PM   #35
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Word it's done 3-0 = k.o. nice one Hot... still can't believe I lost to C.A.L.I though... shoulda seen that bull shit, I won that hands down
 
 


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